YEH DIL UDAAS HAI BOHAT

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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***7STAR I AM SO SORRY NAH PLZ NAZAR NAH HO PLZZZZZZ I AM SORRY. PLZ BAAT TOH KARO NAH BAAT NAHI KARO GAYE TO MAIN KESE EXPLAN KARON GI? PLZZZ FORGIVE ME.
LIKE ALWAYS YE POEM TUMARE NAAM. ***
SAVENSTAR2003 K NAAM.
***YEH DIL UDAAS HAI BOHAT
KOI PEGHAM HI LIKH DO,
TUM APNA NAAM NA LIKHO GUMNAM HI LIKH DO.
MERI QISMAAT MIN GHAM-E-TANHAI HAI LAKIN,
TUM UMER NA LIKHO MAGAR IK SHAM HI LIKH DO.
YEH JANTI HOON K UMER BHAR TANHA HI MUJHKO REHNA HAI,
MAGAR PAL DO PAL GHARI DO GHARI MERE NAAM HI LIKH DO.
CHALO HUM MAN LETE HAIN K SAZA K MUSTAHIQ THEHRE,
KOI INAM NA LIKHO KOI ILZAM HI LIKH DO…

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**iteni achi poem ko bey-car kar diya ye sab uppar likh kar kis ne kaha k main app se naraz hoon? **

plz her poem mere naam maat kiya karen app.

nice one.

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**dehka mere naam iteni achi poem ki toh kisi ne achi hai tak nahi kaha main isliye kehta hoon plzzzzz taliba her poem mere naam nah kiya karo app kion achi bhali poem ko kharab kar deyti ho app plzzzzzz **

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v nice:)

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**who cares 7star chahe koi reply kare nah kare meri her poem tumare naam ho gi ai samj aur main yahan ati hoon toh sirf tumare liye you know very well.
tum ne reply kiya nah thats all bas mere liye yehi kafi hai main ye nahi kehti k baki kisi ko reply nahi karna chaheye jo reply karna chahe most well jo nah karey he is always most well. now be happy tumare liye ek happy news hai ghar phone kar k pata kar lo. **

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Thanks Masoom Muskaan jee really nice you are.

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:blush: ye ap ne sehe kaha :blush:

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Colourful Post :k:

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Private Chat Band Hai Kya ? Waisay Acha Hai Gs Intikhaab Ki Wajah Se Do Naraz Log Khush Ho Jatay Hain :bb:

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:blush:

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**lol :omg:

very nice poem :k:

P.S: kaash humein bhi koi poem dedicate karta :teary1: :fifa:
P.S2: i mean ke karti :blush:
P.S3: kaash :blush: **

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***Ali bhai shukar karo koi aisi nahi hai warna banda nah ghar ka rehta hai nah ghaat ka. ***

madness ki haad hai …:mad:

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**yaar humein ghar ya ghaat se kya waasta, hum to pardesi aadmi hein, na manzil hai na thikana. :frowning: **

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Thanks wese appas ki baat hai ye tanz tha kiya BL bhai?

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7star sahab private chat nahi karte warna main ab tak is ko theek kar chuki hoti.
well main 7star se naraz nahi hoon nahi nahi hoon zara si bas ye mujh se maafi mang le baat khatem.
GS par sab hi khush hote hain.:)

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???':confused:

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7star kuch samjo jin k pass aise pyaar karne wale nahi hote wo aise hi kehte hain aur ek tum ko tum ko meri qadar hi nahi hai.

Thanks Ali bhai.:slight_smile:

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hain ye kiya hai galti sab tumari aur qasoor sara mujh dey rehe ho?

aur mad kis ko kaha hai?

Emotional Attachment-prevention?
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7star tum bhee toh pardesi ho tumara thikana bhee hai aur manzil thikane ka toh mujh pata hai kahan hai manzil jo tumari hai wo mujh pasand nahi.

manzil change karo tum ko zindegi nazar aye gi B. i am serious.

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**you are welcome taliba jee! yeh aapka aapis ka ma’amla hai. no comments! :slight_smile:

P.S: kaash koi humein bhi poem dedicate karta ya karti :teary1:
P.S2: to mein sab gilay shikway bhula deta
P.S3: kaash :blush: **