ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 5:45am

ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai
teray malal nay ye bhi hunar sekhaya hai

ab is say barh kar koi aur mojza kya ho
bujha chiragh holoo’n nay khud jalaya hai

thi ek khwaab ko dafna kay noha gar jo ankh
na pooch kasay usay kabar nay uthaya hai

par huwi hai dararoo’n ki dhoop chehray par
kay aienay par kisi zalzaly ka saya hai

kathan tha marhala karioo’n ka jornay ka bohat
siray say kis nay ye akar sira milaya hai

Ali_2 · October 25, 2007, 6:45am

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

ye kaya hai

apart from it

very nice :k:

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NikamiJano · October 25, 2007, 1:39pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

kathan tha marhala karioo'n ka jornay ka bohat
siray say kis nay ye akar sira milaya hai

beautiful sharing shab :)

Bholay_Bisray · October 25, 2007, 4:05pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

mughay tu smagh hi nahi aai ye poem :D

Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 4:13pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

ap nay reply kya isliye buch gaye baqi sub ko mai warning denay lagi ho

bheegiyaad · October 25, 2007, 4:18pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

:(

Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 4:19pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

:aq:

bheegiyaad · October 25, 2007, 4:21pm

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Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 4:29pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

hollaa=== hawa ka jhonka

Starlight · October 25, 2007, 5:29pm

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NikamiJano · October 25, 2007, 6:34pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

light ap ne aj mu nahi dhoya

Starlight · October 25, 2007, 6:37pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

dhoya hai dear :halo:

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 25, 2007, 7:28pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

umm :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 7:30pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

jo sub ko samjh nahi aye isko agaye

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 25, 2007, 7:32pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

isiliye toh lekah he seb ke coments sei koe faeda nehe hoa me ne socha chelo ap khosh ho jao

muncho · October 25, 2007, 8:31pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

well said

Shab-e-Hijar · October 25, 2007, 8:35pm

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

:aq:

being_lonely · October 26, 2007, 2:30am

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

Behtareeen Ghazal Share Ki Hai Shab Aap Ne :k:

bholibisri · October 28, 2007, 2:35am

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

achi post hia hijar :)

Shab-e-Hijar · October 28, 2007, 6:02am

Re: ye zindagi ka kareena hamay jo aya hai

thanks B n B