Ye zara zara si baat par tarhaN tarhaN ke azaab kiuN!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal February 19, 2002, 10:29pm 1

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By: Amal

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Amal February 19, 2002, 10:31pm 2

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Ye zara zara si baat par tarhaN tarhaN ke azaab kiuN?
jo kisi sey bhi khafa na ho mujhey us khuda ki talaash hey

mujhey laghzishoN pe har gharri koi tok’ta hey baar baar
jisey kar ke dil ko dukh na ho mujhey us gunaah ki talaash hey

meiN dhooNdta hooN wo khizaaN jisey gulshanoN sey pyaar ho
jisey kisi chiragh sey na bey’r ho mujhey us hawa ki talaash hey

mujhey us nagar ki hey justuju jahaN koi bhi chahata nahi lahu
jahaN hiran ko sheir sey dar na ho mujhey us jaga ki talaash hey

yahaN ik lamhey ke parrao meiN merey sarey phool jhulas gaey
ab jahaaN talkhioN ki tappish na ho mujhey us fiza ki talaash hey

bina humsafar ke kab talak koi musafitoN meiN laga rahey
jahaN koi kisi sey juda na ho mujhey us raah ki talaash hey

in husn-kadoN ke shor sey meri samaa’ateiN heiN ajnabi
ho jis pukaar meiN mukhlisi mujhey us sada ki talaash hey

mujhey deikh kar jo ik nazar merey sarey dard samajh sakey
jo is qadar ho chaara-gar mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hey

By: Amal

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

[This message has been edited by Amal (edited February 19, 2002).]

NikamiJano February 19, 2002, 10:39pm 3

zabardast no wording 4 tareaf like always

chalo talashnaY niqlaiN kisi aisay jazeeraY ko jahaN alfaaZ k khazanaY saR-e-aam milteY hooN

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and welcome back

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

NikamiJano February 19, 2002, 10:43pm 4

zabardast

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

speed_master February 19, 2002, 10:56pm 5

Nice .. and Zab10

Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !

musaafir February 20, 2002, 12:26am 6

bahut khuub dost. Sada khush raho!

Regards

chand_chehra February 20, 2002, 1:59am 7

bohat hi nice amal like alwayz

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welcome back

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wasay thay kaha ap itne din

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

Pramod February 20, 2002, 4:34am 8

[quote]
Originally posted by Amal:

Ye zara zara si baat par tarhaN tarhaN ke azaab kiuN?
jo kisi sey bhi khafa na ho mujhey us khuda ki talaash hey

mujhey laghzishoN pe har gharri koi tok’ta hey baar baar
jisey kar ke dil ko dukh na ho mujhey us gunaah ki talaash hey

meiN dhooNdta hooN wo khizaaN jisey gulshanoN sey pyaar ho
jisey kisi chiragh sey na bey’r ho mujhey us hawa ki talaash hey

mujhey us nagar ki hey justuju jahaN koi bhi chahata nahi lahu
jahaN hiran ko sheir sey dar na ho mujhey us jaga ki talaash hey

yahaN ik lamhey ke parrao meiN merey sarey phool jhulas gaey
ab jahaaN talkhioN ki tappish na ho mujhey us fiza ki talaash hey

bina humsafar ke kab talak koi musafitoN meiN laga rahey
jahaN koi kisi sey juda na ho mujhey us raah ki talaash hey

in husn-kadoN ke shor sey meri samaa’ateiN heiN ajnabi
ho jis pukaar meiN mukhlisi mujhey us sada ki talaash hey

mujhey deikh kar jo ik nazar merey sarey dard samajh sakey
jo is qadar ho chaara-gar mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hey

By: Amal

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It is really great. Amal ji..Kya baat hai. Maza aa gaya.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Amjad_Chohan February 20, 2002, 3:47pm 9

Another Beautiful Post Amal

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Capricorn February 20, 2002, 7:16pm 10

Amal, a beautiful ghazal indeed

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Love the power of your words and the feelings.

Dharkan February 20, 2002, 11:08pm 11

meiN dhooNdta hooN wo khizaaN jisey gulshanoN sey pyaar ho
jisey kisi chiragh sey na bey’r ho mujhey us hawa ki talaash hey

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WOW…

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Indeed its beautifully expressed n’ a spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings within urself.I guess its morelike sayin’=== mujhey chand chahye

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but u done a marvellous job here.Thanx for sharin’ it wid us.

Amal February 21, 2002, 1:47pm 12

Thank you very much Nikami ji

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Thanx very much speed master and musaafir

Thank CC … aap ke aas paas hi tha

Thanx very much **Pramod, Amjad bhai, ** and Cap so nice of you

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Thanx Dharkan … You are correct that it’s like “mujhey chand chahye” … chand milta to nahi, lekin khaahish karney meiN kya harj hey? aur wesey bhi, kehtey heiN ke “shot at the moon so that even if you fail, you end up in sky”

Finally, thank you everybody for appreciating my work so generously

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

[This message has been edited by Amal (edited February 21, 2002).]

ASA February 21, 2002, 2:28pm 13

jabardast Amal…

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BholiBhali February 21, 2002, 4:25pm 14

Great!!!
is baar aap ka topic bhi different hay.

Amal February 21, 2002, 11:48pm 15

Thanx BB

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Just trying to explore myself as to what
else I can do. So far, I have not been
rejected altogether for which I’m extremely
thankful to everyone. But I will continue to
seek your opinion as more “offbeat” stuff is
in the pipeline

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Sehar February 22, 2002, 4:41am 16

I like the subject of this poem. It’s different.

Amal ji, irada kiya hai :-p Har meehnay ‘ghazal of the month’ ? Baqi sab ke liye muskhil paida kar rahe haiN. Mazak kar rahi hooN, mind matt kijiye ga. Keep it up.

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NikamiJano February 22, 2002, 2:08pm 17

hmmm CC k pass thayyyyyyyyyyy uff me asiay ap ko phoolon main hawaOon main khushboO main dhondhti rahi ok next time chand sitaoON per ja k…

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aur chandoO ko dekho zara batai be nahi

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

_kashish February 22, 2002, 2:39pm 18

mujhey deikh kar jo ik nazar merey sarey dard samajh sakey
jo is qadar ho chaara-gar mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hey

beautiful thought Amal…is it really urs?

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system February 22, 2002, 3:31pm 19

A very beautiful ghazal. Elegant choice of words. Keep it up.

PakArtist February 22, 2002, 9:23pm 20

Really nice Ghuzal..

Good combination of words.

keep it up..

Pak Artist

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