no doubt u did excellent job :)
Thanks for sharing
"Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong."
juMurA
February 23, 2002, 9:22am
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Originally posted by Amal:
yahaN ik lamhey ke parrao meiN merey sarey phool jhulas gaey
ab jahaaN talkhioN ki tappish na ho mujhey us fiza ki talaash hey
mujhey deikh kar jo ik nazar merey sarey dard samajh sakey
jo is qadar ho chaara-gar mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hey
By: Amal
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Ye zara zara si baat par tarhaN tarhaN ke azaab kiuN?
once again wow Amal jee … beautiful ghazal… bas aisey hi hameen apney khobsorat kalam sey nawaztey rahey
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Allah karey zour-e-kalam our ziada…
Amal
February 24, 2002, 1:13pm
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Originally posted by ~Sehar~:
**I like the subject of this poem. It’s different.
Amal ji, irada kiya hai :-p Har meehnay ‘ghazal of the month’ ? Baqi sab ke liye muskhil paida kar rahe haiN. Mazak kar rahi hooN, mind matt kijiye ga. Keep it up.
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I guess you liked only the subject and not the wordings. Isn’t it?
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Arey mind karney wali kya baat hey, ye to aap ki judgment ka imtihaan hey…ball ab aap ki court meiN hey
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Thanx very much &Passionate, PakArtist, GTG, JuMmurA and Rameesha ji
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
Amal
February 24, 2002, 1:16pm
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**Amal smiles…
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…
Sehar
February 24, 2002, 3:46pm
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oh no…I didn’t mean it like that. I loved the whole ghazal.
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Amal
February 25, 2002, 2:57pm
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KinaRa
February 25, 2002, 11:41pm
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Beautiful Amal
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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~
Amal
February 26, 2002, 10:52pm
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pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya KinaRa
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…