Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha

Amal · March 31, 2003, 11:08pm

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Ye chaal meri samaa’at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
wo dey raha tha hukm magar lehja saara iltijaa ka tha

jisey meiN samajh na saka kabhi wo aaNdhiyoN ki cheekh thi
mujhey laga wo dhula dhula haseen lehjza sabaa ka tha

teri kash’makash ki hey khabar ke tu kuch samajh na saka magar
meri mohabbatoN ki kitaab meiN saara tazkira wafaa ka tha

mujhey deeN fiza ney zamaanateiN ke be-dharrak chiraagh jalaey ja
merey tasavvuroN meiN kaheiN kaheiN phir bhi khadsha hawa ka tha

dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha

jo roz-e-mehshar jama huwey unhey kab talab terey deed ki thi
terey ‘bandigaan-e-neyaaz’ ko saara intizaar jazaa ka tha

By: Amal

Sehar · March 31, 2003, 11:11pm

Ufff....mere paas aflaz nahi haiN... :)

NikamiJano · March 31, 2003, 11:13pm

Re: Ye chaal meri samaa’at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha

** Aymal ** sari gazal he beautiful no words but ye awsome thanks 4 sharing with us …

and thanks 4 posting 4 U..

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 31, 2003, 11:20pm

Amal kia baat hai ap ke:k::k:
bohut khobsoorat likhe hai.her sher aik se bahr ker aik hai:k::k:
thanks a lot for sharing such a master piece:flower1:
khuda apko khuss rakhay and aur ziada likhne ke tofeek da

chand_chehra · April 1, 2003, 2:54am

Re: Ye chaal meri samaa’at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha

woww amal beautiful :k:

ullujii · April 1, 2003, 2:58am

Amal bhai very nice :k:

WiseGuy · April 1, 2003, 3:39am

Re: Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
wo dey raha tha hukm magar lehja saara iltijaa ka tha

jisey meiN samajh na saka kabhi wo aaNdhiyoN ki cheekh thi
mujhey laga wo dhula dhula haseen lehjza sabaa ka tha

teri kash'makash ki hey khabar ke tu kuch samajh na saka magar
meri mohabbatoN ki kitaab meiN saara tazkira wafaa ka tha

mujhey deeN fiza ney zamaanateiN ke be-dharrak chiraagh jalaey ja
merey tasavvuroN meiN kaheiN kaheiN phir bhi khadsha hawa ka tha

dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha

jo roz-e-mehshar jama huwey unhey kab talab terey deed ki thi
terey 'bandigaan-e-neyaaz' ko saara intizaar jazaa ka tha

By: Amal
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Very nice, eik eik shair bohat acha hai... MashaAllah
Thanks for sharing :)

weteyes82 · April 1, 2003, 6:39am

very nice ghazal Amal…thnx for sharing and keep up the good work :k:

Azad · April 1, 2003, 7:00am

jo roz-e-mehshar jama huwey unhey kab talab terey deed ki thi
terey ‘bandigaan-e-neyaaz’ ko saara intizaar jazaa ka tha

Beautiful :k:

Dilsay · April 1, 2003, 7:36am

Very nice and master pice like always.....

ameen · April 1, 2003, 7:58am

really very nice.

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 1, 2003, 10:33am

wowww amal bhae ap nei boht boht boht achei ghazal likhe hei flower1:isi tarah likte rehein
muje autograph keb deh ghe:)

Azad · April 1, 2003, 12:43pm

Jab aap ki shadi ho jay gii

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 1, 2003, 1:18pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

Jab aap ki shadi ho jay gii :)
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mei nei amal bhae sei poocha hei ap sei nehe..apnei fuzol comment apne pas rekhhy shukria

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · April 1, 2003, 1:30pm

nice one :k:

nikii · April 1, 2003, 1:35pm

very nice Amal ji :)

Azad · April 1, 2003, 1:51pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *

mei nei amal bhae sei poocha hei ap sei nehe..apnei fuzol comment apne pas rekhhy shukria
[/QUOTE]

:D

WiseGuy · April 1, 2003, 2:12pm

Fuzool log fuzool comments

_Passionate · April 1, 2003, 8:02pm

bohat khoob amal :k: thanks for posting :k:

guybrush · April 1, 2003, 9:13pm

simply superb :k: