wah bahut khoob amal!
Wah!
Awesome.. :k:
*dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha
*
Re: Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
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*Originally posted by Amal: *
Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
wo dey raha tha hukm magar lehja saara iltijaa ka tha
jisey meiN samajh na saka kabhi wo aaNdhiyoN ki cheekh thi
mujhey laga wo dhula dhula haseen lehjza sabaa ka tha
teri kash'makash ki hey khabar ke tu kuch samajh na saka magar
meri mohabbatoN ki kitaab meiN saara tazkira wafaa ka tha
mujhey deeN fiza ney zamaanateiN ke be-dharrak chiraagh jalaey ja
merey tasavvuroN meiN kaheiN kaheiN phir bhi khadsha hawa ka tha
dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha
jo roz-e-mehshar jama huwey unhey kab talab terey deed ki thi
terey 'bandigaan-e-neyaaz' ko saara intizaar jazaa ka tha
By: Amal
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mujhey deeN fiza ney zamaanateiN ke be-dharrak chiraagh jalaey ja
merey tasavvuroN meiN kaheiN kaheiN phir bhi khadsha hawa ka tha
Marvellous.... Phir khadsha kahaaN taq puhancha, Charaagh ki kyaa Surat-e-haal hay:~)
Well,this ghazal is also very beautiful and meaningful with perfect use of beautiful and appropriate words...
Keep it up and Thanks for sharing with us:-)
**
Tery baad to jo bhi mujhey mila aek se barrh kar aek bewafa
merey shehar ki hawaaoN meiN asar shaed kisi wabaa ka tha **
NiakmiJi ye sab aap ka kia dhara hey,
hamaarey leeye sab ke paas alfaaz khatm ho gaey
heiN 
…Anyway, mazaaq aek taraf, ~Sehar~
& NiakmiJi, aap donoN ka bohat bohat shukriya 
ghazal kisi ke, CC, ullujii, WiseGuy, weteyes82,
Azad, Dilsay, ameen, BoReD-iN-BrIsBaNe,
nikii, &Passionate, guybrush, Lamhay and **
Gizzy,** ghazal pasand karney ke leeye aap sab
dostoN ka be’had shukriya. A very big thanx for
all of you:)
Masoom Muskaan arey aap ko autograph nahi
dena to aur kisey dena hey? Balke sirf aap hi ko
dena hey, aur kisi ko nahi dena. Theek hey? Acha
batao hamaari choti si behna ko kitney autographs
chahiyeiN:)
Fil’haal to khadsha aur charaagh donoN hi salaamat
heiN, deikhye kon khara nikalta hey:~) …
Ghazal pasand karney ke leeye shukriya:flower1:
it’s so beautiful.
Lajavaab :k:
I can’t believe i missed it.
Love the last line!!!!!
nice:k:
yipeeeeeee:hula:
bhae ab ap man he gei heyn to 2 autograph de dena ek meri dost ke liee bihh:)
to keb de gehy:(
Oh man this is fabulous…loved every word of your ghazel:k:…Amal plz aek autograph mujhae bhi mil sakta hae pleeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzz:)
~Nazish~,~MuNiYa~, Mehvar and Galaxy,
aap dostoN ka be’had shukriya jo aap ney meri adna
kaavish ko is qadar saraaha:flower1:
Masoom Muskaan, aap bataao aap ko kab chahiye autograph:)
This is beautiful achay log achi baat he kartay hain
Re: Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
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Ye chaal meri samaa'at ki thi ya dhoka us ki sadaa ka tha
wo dey raha tha hukm magar lehja saara iltijaa ka tha
jisey meiN samajh na saka kabhi wo aaNdhiyoN ki cheekh thi
mujhey laga wo dhula dhula haseen lehjza sabaa ka tha
teri kash'makash ki hey khabar ke tu kuch samajh na saka magar
meri mohabbatoN ki kitaab meiN saara tazkira wafaa ka tha
mujhey deeN fiza ney zamaanateiN ke be-dharrak chiraagh jalaey ja
merey tasavvuroN meiN kaheiN kaheiN phir bhi khadsha hawa ka tha
dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha
jo roz-e-mehshar jama huwey unhey kab talab terey deed ki thi
terey 'bandigaan-e-neyaaz' ko saara intizaar jazaa ka tha
By: Amal
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impressive.........
Superb as usual Amal ab aap ko apna dewaan zaroor chapwana chahiyai!!
wah Amal Sahab wah..I really missed it.
matla aur ye sher to mujhe behad pasand aaya..
dawaa bhi ki duwaa bhi ki magar dard ki shiddat na tham saki
jo mohabbatoN ney mujhey diya wo zakhm hi gehra balaa ka tha
wah kya khana...
dheron daad kubul kijiye.....