Yaad

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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baRa dushwaaR hai ik sath do tarfa taulaQ be
nibhhana aa'yeno se pathrooN k sath rehNa be

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achha hai bahna magar

taaruff rog ban jaaye to oos ko bhulna behtar
taaluq bojh ban jaaye to oos ko toDna achha
wo afsaana jise taqmeel tak laana na ho mumkin
oose eik khoobsurat moR de kar chhoDna achha

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[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:
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just do something different..like

kaun kahta hai aasmaaN meiN suraakh ho nahiN sakta
eik paTHar to tabiyat se oocHaalo yaaroN.

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Or like that..

ChHain laian gay tum sa tumhari baNyazi
tum mango gay hum sa gharoor apna

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Janta hooN aik aisay shakas ko ma bhi munir
gham say pathar ho gya lakin kabhi roya nahi

[This message has been edited by juMurA (edited April 04, 2002).]

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[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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umeR bhaR likhtey rahaY phiR be waraQ saada raha
janaY kia lufZ thaY jo hum se tahreeR na huweY

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Kitne lehjon ke ghilafon main chupaoon tujh ko??
shehar wale mera mozoo-e-sukhan jante hain !

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[quote]
Originally posted by juMurA:
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Kabhee patharon kee bhee suna karo awaaz

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dooriaN kitni be hooN fasla kuch be tu nahi
sath rehna zarori tu nahi dil maiN rahnaY k leaY

[This message has been edited by Capricorn (edited April 04, 2002).]

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[quote]
Originally posted by juMurA:
** Or like that..

ChHain laian gay tum sa tumhari baNyazi
tum mango gay hum sa gharoor apna

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Wah jumura jee zabardast

Ik lamhe ko raza poochee thee
Baat hone lagee zil-e-ilahi kee tarah..

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This is beautiful but Jumura look at the following verse. I have never liked any other optimistic verse than this one. If you know more come on and post them

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Woh aur honge jin ko duboya hoga tum ne
Kabhee aana meree raah mein bhanwar ban ke!

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[quote]
Originally posted by Capricorn:

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dooriaN kitni be hooN fasla kuch be tu nahi
sath rehna zarori tu nahi dil maiN rahnaY k leaY

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ye rishta-e-khaloos hai tootey gha kis tarha
rooHooN ko choo sakay haiN bhla kab kisi k hath

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:

** ko_ii kaa.NTaa chubhaa nahii.n hotaa
dil agar phuul saa nahii.n hotaa

kuchh to majabuuriyaa.N rahii ho.ngii
yuu.N ko_ii bevafaa nahii.n hotaa

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kantooN se mohabat kartey haiN kirdaaR tu dekho phooloN ka
zakhmooN se kaleJa phuut jaieY peR sath nibhana paRta hai

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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ye rishta-e-khaloos hai tootey gha kis tarha
rooHooN ko choo sakay haiN bhla kab kisi k hath

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Kash ik baghee sitare kee tarah aansoo mera
teree palkon par machalta aur duniya dekhtee!

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[quote]
Originally posted by Capricorn:
** Kash ik baghee sitare kee tarah aansoo mera
teree palkon par machalta aur duniya dekhtee!

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aik paal k leaY aiey umer-e-garaiza'N thuum ja
ik nazaR ne dekha hai mujhay bareY payaeR k sath

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

72

[quote]
Originally posted by juMurA:
** Or like that..

ChHain laian gay tum sa tumhari baNyazi
tum mango gay hum sa gharoor apna

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jumurA jee sher kuch yuuN hai

hum cheeN laiN gaiN tum se ye shan-e-baynayzi
tum mangteY phiro gaye apna garooR hum se

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

73

[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:
** achha hai bahna magar

taaruff rog ban jaaye to oos ko bhulna behtar
taaluq bojh ban jaaye to oos ko toDna achha
wo afsaana jise taqmeel tak laana na ho mumkin
oose eik khoobsurat moR de kar chhoDna achha

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hmmmm Pra jee nice one

ro k kahaN rukaY haiN mohabat k qafilaY
bus yuuN huwa k dil ne zamanaY badal deaY
soocha usay tu hum ne na milnaY ki thaaN le
dekha usaY tu saraY bahanaY badal deaY

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

74

Thanx for correction

I should start eating Badams

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75

zaberdast

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hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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If you go other way around

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Tumhi nay hum ko sonaya na dukh apna
Duwa wo kartay ka hum Asman hila datay

77

This is a good twist but how about this?

Safar jis ka muqaddar ho,
usay roka naheen karte!

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[quote]
Originally posted by NikamiJano:
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aik paal k leaY aiey umer-e-garaiza'N thuum ja
ik nazaR ne dekha hai mujhay bareY payaeR k sath

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hi yeh andaz tere rukne ka
waqt ko bhee ruka ruka dekha!

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Jee jee zaroor magar nihaar moon khanee hain aur woh bhee raat bhar shahad mein bhigo ke..ok?

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chalo capri ab bus bari hogaye
ab to agh bhi lug gaye

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