Yaad

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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fara, thanx a lot for the compliments :~) And nice to see you back :)

moonmine, thanx and welcome to poetry section :)

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Beautiful As Usual… :slight_smile:

Specialy ^^

Wonderful Amal… :flower1:

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aaaney do yaar, ham chodhry loug derney waley naien . :smiley:

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long, but nice....

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Amal jee very nice... hamasha ke taraha aur hamasha ke tara ya dua ka Khush rakoo

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its simply awesome
takes me somewhere
gr8 one

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Golden ScorpionMysterious Woman, Dilsay and deadsoul, thanx for appreciating this poem. I am happy that I wasn't wrong :~)

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very nice!

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wah g wah ek taveel magar achi kahani ko nazam key surat main paish kia ....... nice effort amal ....... keep it up

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Thank you very much ghazal kisi ke and Sannan :)

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hehe I still remember the days when I used to bug you to publish your book hoping you will do it someday.. so kidhar phonchey?

like always, beautiful :-)

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^ I’m still waiting for it :teary1:

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boht khob amal bhae:) thx 4 sharin

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par waqt ke haath sey lamhoN ki reit nikli to khula
ke hum faasloN ke an'ginat samandaroN ke aar paar
apney apney khaaboN ki tooti hui kashtiyaaN utthey

mukarar, something i said in my poem

dil ki chowth

you write so well, Amal.
thanks,

dushwari

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:k:

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:|

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i am speechless Amal. its just awesome!
really mujy nai pata ke kese tareef karon is nazm ki. bar bar parhny ko ji chahta hai isay.

:k:

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Shukriya IS :)

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middle mi to mujy apni AAMI yaad aagaen :teary3:

bohat dukhi par bohat achi thi:k:

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Maza nahi aya