~woh mera na husaka magar~ (My all time favt)

Nazi83 · November 4, 2004, 10:35pm

Jo ajj dekha use ser-e-rah
Hay wo bhi tanha yaqeen na aya
Wo jaan mehfil hay ab akela
Na koi humdam na koi saya

Hain yaad ab bhi mujhay wo lamhay
K jab wo mera tha sirf mera
Thay rang bikhray musraton k
Jahan main khushiyon ka tha basera

Hay yaad us ko bhi wo zamana
K waqt tanha na tha guzerta
Khatakty rehti usse bhi judayi
Duaain milnay ki main bhi kerta

Mager mukader main thi judayi
Wo mujh se bichra qareeb aa ker
Thin jis k dam se tamam khushiyan
Chala gaya wo mujhay rula ker
( best shair ever)

Ye mujh ko maloom tha k khush hay
Wo meri zindagi se door ho ker
Mager main us ko bhula na saka
Bohat dukhi tha main us ko kho ker

Mager ye mujh ko khaber mili phir
Usse bhi na bakhsha zindagi ne
K jis ne thukra diya kisi ko
Usse bhi thukra diya kisi ne

Jo mujh ko wiraan kiya tha uss ne
Sukoon us ko bhi ab kahan hay
Mili na ager mujh ko baharain
To uss k angan main bhi khizan hay

Wo mera na hosaka mager ab
Mujhay judayi ka gham nahi hay
Meri terhan hay wo bhi tanha
Meray liye ye bhi kam nahi hay.

abc1234 · November 4, 2004, 10:38pm

hayayyyyyy :S

cuteepie · November 5, 2004, 2:00pm

system · November 5, 2004, 2:22pm

Simply wonderful!

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 5, 2004, 2:30pm

beautiful. .

m_kamal · November 5, 2004, 3:31pm

Behtarin

Nazi83 · November 5, 2004, 7:22pm

Irem itni tandi ah na bharoo hayyee kya hua??
........................
~~Cutepie, KamooshNigahien, HH, nd Mkamal bhai thankoo~~

Aryaan · November 6, 2004, 2:01am

Bohat khoob Nazi. :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 6, 2004, 5:06am

Re: ~woh mera na husaka magar~ (My all time favt)

*Originally posted by Nazi83: *

Jo ajj dekha use ser-e-rah
Hay wo bhi tanha yaqeen na aya
Wo jaan mehfil hay ab akela
Na koi humdam na koi saya

Hain yaad ab bhi mujhay wo lamhay
K jab wo mera tha sirf mera
Thay rang bikhray musraton k
Jahan main khushiyon ka tha basera

Hay yaad us ko bhi wo zamana
K waqt tanha na tha guzerta
Khatakty rehti usse bhi judayi
Duaain milnay ki main bhi kerta

Mager mukader main thi judayi
Wo mujh se bichra qareeb aa ker
Thin jis k dam se tamam khushiyan
Chala gaya wo mujhay rula ker
( best shair ever)

Ye mujh ko maloom tha k khush hay
Wo meri zindagi se door ho ker
Mager main us ko bhula na saka
Bohat dukhi tha main us ko kho ker

Mager ye mujh ko khaber mili phir
Usse bhi na bakhsha zindagi ne
K jis ne thukra diya kisi ko
Usse bhi thukra diya kisi ne

Jo mujh ko wiraan kiya tha uss ne
Sukoon us ko bhi ab kahan hay
Mili na ager mujh ko baharain
To uss k angan main bhi khizan hay

Wo mera na hosaka mager ab
Mujhay judayi ka gham nahi hay
Meri terhan hay wo bhi tanha
Meray liye ye bhi kam nahi hay.

two thumbz up .. ..

system · November 6, 2004, 1:16pm

very nice :k:

X_Communist · November 6, 2004, 5:30pm

Zabardast!

Nazi83 · November 6, 2004, 9:00pm

Aryan, Ghazo, Vivo nd X
~thankoo~:flower2:

Rani_Pakistani · November 7, 2004, 8:39pm

beautiful :-)

show_sha · November 8, 2004, 7:14am

nice :k:

Aceones · November 8, 2004, 5:13pm

v well written :k:
thnx for sharin

but dont like the idea of the poet dont mind

Golden_Scorpion_1 · November 12, 2004, 11:37am

Wonderful Poem Nazo

Whever the poet is.. I am not Picking MakhiaaN out of his work… just… aik SACHAY ASHIQ ke taraf se Keh raha hooN

Ke… Mehboob ke Nakhush honay pe .. Ya AKayla honay pe Ashiq kabhi khush naheeN hota

Baqi.. Shair Uncle Janay and.. usski souch…

Dynamic_fire · November 12, 2004, 3:46pm

very nice:flower2:

safeena · November 16, 2004, 4:53am

Wo mera na hosaka mager ab
Mujhay judayi ka gham nahi hay
Meri terhan hay wo bhi tanha
Meray liye ye bhi kam nahi hay.

niceee

Nayab · November 16, 2004, 6:16pm

Bohot Khoob..:)

Lamhay · November 16, 2004, 6:26pm

Re: ~woh mera na husaka magar~ (My all time favt)

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Nazi83: *

Wo mera na hosaka mager ab
Mujhay judayi ka gham nahi hay
Meri terhan hay wo bhi tanha
Meray liye ye bhi kam nahi hay.

[/QUOTE]

Pehaly Tu thanks 4 sharing nazi , Very Nice!

Aur doosaray ye Misra samjh na aya

cuz sab keh rahay hain Golden scorpion and Aceones K ashiq mehboob k nakhush honay per khush nahin hosakta per ye Jo misra hai
uss main tu woh kehraha hai K ye bhi kam nahi hai .....? Tu ab woh iss baat main apnay ghum ka izhaar karaha hai ya khush horaha hai ........mujhe lagta hai shayyer sahab keh rahay hain k mujhay juda honay ka ghum nahin ,balkay woh meri tarhan akela aur tanha hai ye ghum hai....

tu iss main shair tu mehboob k nakhush honay per afsurda hai ...Am I rite?

agar aisa hai Tu ye Golden scorpion ji ya Aceones Sahab phir kis baat per pareshaan hain .......???