jahan tak mera khayal hai tu shayer phaley tu judayi key baad apney mehboob key barey mei sun kar yeah ussey dhiek kar kuch ankahi guzrey huey lamhuon ku buhat hi sadgi sey ilfaz mei piru kar hamarey samney peish kar raha hai , dosri taraf woh apney humdum key barey mei bhi tazkara kar raha hai gila bhi hai shair ku lekin phir shair iss baat pey kushi ka izhar tu nahi lekin eik qism ki jeet ka ehsas key jistharn sey "uss" ney shair ku tukhraya tha usi tharhan kisi ney usety tukhra deya lekin phir as "uss" ki tanhayi ka alam bhi tu shair sey dekha nahi jata woh iss baat pey bhi dukhi hia key woh tanha hai lekin phir iss baat pey qadreey kush bhi key shair ki tarhan woh bhi akela aur tanha hai ...
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*Originally posted by Nazi83: *
thx for the appreciation lamhey ...
jahan tak mera khayal hai tu shayer phaley tu judayi key baad apney mehboob key barey mei sun kar yeah ussey dhiek kar kuch ankahi guzrey huey lamhuon ku buhat hi sadgi sey ilfaz mei piru kar hamarey samney peish kar raha hai , dosri taraf woh apney humdum key barey mei bhi tazkara kar raha hai gila bhi hai shair ku lekin phir shair iss baat pey kushi ka izhar tu nahi lekin eik qism ki jeet ka ehsas key jistharn sey "uss" ney shair ku tukhraya tha usi tharhan kisi ney usety tukhra deya lekin phir as "uss" ki tanhayi ka alam bhi tu shair sey dekha nahi jata woh iss baat pey bhi dukhi hia key woh tanha hai lekin phir iss baat pey qadreey kush bhi key shair ki tarhan woh bhi akela aur tanha hai ...
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Yaar i know ye tu shuru main keh raha hai
per akhir main woh Ghum geen bhi hai.....
yahi tu poch rahi hoon k woh ghum geen bhi hai k HAPPY GOLA hi hai.........
(P.s:- Usnay kia tha bura ab saza bhugtu bachoo lolzzzzzz like these kind of stuff)
Re: Re: ~woh mera na husaka magar~ (My all time favt)
Hi
Lamhay Gi…
First of all.. I would say .. ke.. SHUKRIA for the Point U raised … Secondly…
If U read the Last Stanza in with the continuety of the Poem.. jahaaN poet is Writing the Verses in a Form of… HE did SOSO to em and… SO SO happend To him… So … the MOOD of the Verse is not SAD its sort of Revengeful…
BUt.. Ye…
You are Right… If we only Read Last Stanza.. tou… U have the Point…
Akhri band ki Tashreeh can be wat U mentioned
per akhir main woh Ghum geen bhi hai.....
yahi tu poch rahi hoon k woh ghum geen bhi hai k HAPPY GOLA hi hai.........
(P.s:- Usnay kia tha bura ab saza bhugtu bachoo lolzzzzzz like these kind of stuff)
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woh ghamgheen bhi hai lekin lolz "saza bhugtu bachoo" yeah wali baat bhi hai ..
Wo mera na hosaka mager ab
Mujhay judayi ka gham nahi hay
Meri terhan hay wo bhi tanha
Meray liye ye bhi kam nahi hay.
shair ku phaley dukh tha key woh uska na husaka lekin ab ussey judayi ka gham isliye nahi hai kuonkey uskey sath bhi wohi hua ju shair key sath usney kya tha lekin shair usey abh bhi muhabat karta hai isliye woh ghamgheen bhi hai key ab woh bhi tanha hai kuonkey shair ku tanhayi ka ehsas hai shair tanha rah chuka hai aur ju kathan lamhey usney guzarien hainh ab wohi lamhey uss pey guzrien gien jisey shair ney dil o jan sey cahaha tha !! or hai !!
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*Originally posted by Golden Scorpion: *
Har cheez ki Practice karni Chahye .. .kia pata .. kissi Achi Paste company ko Zaroorat hoo :D
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Kisi Ishtihaar main (AD) baghair dhant walay logon ki zarorat ho Tu ap Bakhubhi Tahreef farma hojayega Uss waqt tak nit naye tooth paste istimaal kartay kartay Dhant hi kia Bateesi hi Ghayab hochuki hogi tu Naye Type k logh with out Teeth >>>>>> Haar Naye Cheez achi lagay GI ............ :p
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