**hamaRi zaat maiN mehshar bapa ha mudat se
magaR ye hum k koi faisla nahi karteY
gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa’OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY
shikaste sheesha-e-dil ki sada he suN laiteY
wo tund khoO jo kisi ki suna nahi kaRteY**
AQ
July 21, 2007, 9:48pm
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Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
**gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa'OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
**laikin kaanTay nikalay bagher aagay bhee tau naheeN baRh saktaY :)
wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY
apnay dil kee baat kartaa hogaa,
doosroN kay dil aisay loug dekhaa naheeN kartaY :)
The above two shairs have a deep thinking working behind them but as we see people can justify all kind of acts.
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bohat khoob :k:
Amal
July 22, 2007, 1:10am
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Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
**hamaRi zaat maiN mehshar bapa ha mudat se
magaR ye hum k koi faisla nahi karteY
gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa’OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
shikaste sheesha-e-dil ki sada he suN laiteY
wo tund khoO jo kisi ki suna nahi kaRteY**
Beautiful stuff NikamiJi Thanx for sharing it with us
Sheal
July 22, 2007, 1:23am
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Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
very nice. i like this very much.
** gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa'OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY
**
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nice :k:
Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa'OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
laikin kaanTay nikalay bagher aagay bhee tau naheeN baRh saktaY :)
wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY
apnay dil kee baat kartaa hogaa,
doosroN kay dil aisay loug dekhaa naheeN kartaY :)
The above two shairs have a deep thinking working behind them but as we see people can justify all kind of acts.
:) yes i know lakin her aik ko deep thinking smaj maiN nahi na ati AQ:)
Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
thanks SHab
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Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
very nice. i like this very much.
gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY
jo ruk k paa'OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY
wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY
:)
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Buhat Khoob..
PS: Welcome BaQ.. We Missed Ur Participation..
Re: wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai
bohot khoob thx for sharing :)
muddii
July 23, 2007, 11:04am
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**hamaRi zaat maiN mehshar bapa ha mudat se**
**magaR ye hum k koi faisla nahi karteY**
**gubaaR-e-rah se agaY niqal gaye hoteY**
**jo ruk k paa'OoN se kanteY juda nahi karteY**
**wo dil pe waaR be kaRta hai ye be kahta hai**
**k Dil k zakham be ajab haiN bhRa nahi karteY**
**shikaste sheesha-e-dil ki sada he suN laiteY**
**wo tund khoO jo kisi ki suna nahi kaRteY**
Stairs say gir kay zakhmi hoonay kay baad baray zakhmi zakhmi shair nikal rahay hain:) How r u now? Nice choice:)