Watan ki mitti pukarti he... Countdown to independence day

Pyare Sathiyoo Assalam-o-alaikum

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Dosrey forums meiN jis tarah her koyi 14 August key liye itney khobsorat tareeqey sey contribute ker raha he to us ko dekh ker kheyal aaya keh Poetry section bhi is meiN apna hissa kyooN nah daley…
To socha yeh he keh hum loog yahan Poetry sec. meiN bhi countdown start kareeN, to jaisey keh yeh Poetry forum he to is meiN hum sab (our sab sey muraad her guppy, neya ho ya porana) rozana kochh nah kochh post kareeN, koyi nazm, koyi ghazal.. jo bhi ho sakey our jis tarah sey chaheeN apney watan ko heraj-e-tehseeN paish kareeN..

Is umeed pe maiN ney yeh thread start ki he keh aap sab mayoos naheen kareeN gey

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so maiN shoru eik duaa sey karti hooN…

***Moula! is basti ki aankheeN kab tak sapney dakheeN
Aisa bhi ik soraj, jis meiN chehrey apney dekheeN

Rut aaye rut haye Moula! khali apney hath
her mousam meiN phichhli rut key zahm chaley haiN sath
in zahmooN ki khushboo meiN haiN jeeney key armaan
aath karoorh insaan
isbasti ki khaak hamarey honey ki pehchan
jeeney ka samaan

Tery arshooN sey ab hum per hun barsey ya kaal!
Moula hum benaam parindey, kaisey chhorheeN dhaal***

Our yeh lijiye meri aaj ki contribution, meri eik fav nazm by A.I.A.. beshak ilfaaz mery naheen per juzbat mery haiN …

WataN ki mitti pukarti he

*Hawa-e-sarhad hamarey shehrooN ki taraf aayi to us key hoontooN pe yeh nawaa thi

“MujahidooN ko naveed puhnchey
keh aazaish ki gharhi key woh muntazir they -Woh aa gayi he
sadaa watan ki her eik sarhad pe goonjti he
Uthoo keh tum ko watan ki mitti pukarti he!”

Her eik lab pe yehi sadaa thi
watan bulaye to sochney ka kya mukaam he?
Chaloo keh sarhad pe apney khooN sey likheeN shajaat ki dastaaneeN
chaloo keh fani ko ghair-fani meiN dhaalney ka kamal janeeN

HameeN watan ki ghulaab mitti eik zarra tamaam duniya key mal-o-zar sey azeezter he!
is eik zarrey meiN aath sadiyooN ki dastaneeN likhi hoyi haiN
yeh dastaneeN hamarey her ik qartey meiN moujzan haiN
Uthoo keh mazi ki dastanooN ko apney tazaa lahoo sey saincheeN
keh aaney waley dinooN ki faslooN key beej booney ka waqt aya
Jo aaj boeeN gey kal ussi ko katna he
keh jo bhi lamha guzar raha he
Woh aagey guzrey charagh lamhooN our aaney waley faragh lamhooN meiN rabta he!

Pukartey haiN darooN, dareechooN sey aabroo key bahar mousam
ghulaab booney ki rut naheen he keh hum ko apney
gharooN meiN khiltey ghulaab bachooN ko palna he
keh maooN, behnooN key phool chehrey our masoom betiooN key
labooN pe khiltey howey shagofooN sarhadooN ki taraf barhti hoyi seyaa hawaooN key taiz lamhooN ki zad meiN aaney sey rokna he
sarooN ko hath meiN ley key nikloo
keh aaney waley dinooN meiN izzat our aabroo ka nishaaN yehi he
Watan ki mitti hamari maaN ka sufaid aanchal he
jis ki hurmat hamari hasti sey moutbir he

Watan key rastey meiN jo supar ho, woh seena hum ko azeez-tar he
jahan pe manzil he aabroo ki waheeN hamari bhi rahguzar he
khum-e-shahadat meiN aab-e-hewaaN chhalak raha he
hameeN khabar he!

Pukarti he zameeN ki sarhad
“Azeem he go wafaa ki manzil, azeem-tar haiN woh paooN jin ko
sadaa watan ki hamarey daman meiN ley key aayi
Azeem-tar he woh sabz khwahish
jo shouq-e-rishtoon ki istewari ki surkh mitti sey phootti he
Azeem-tar he woh saans jis ki azeez dori
Watan key rastey meiN tootti he”
*

ab aap ki bari

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Wa Alaikum Assalaam and Adaab arz hay Rameesha jee :~)

ok kuch likhna hie paray ga ab tou hmmm let me think

ok pehlay tou yeh hona chahiye tha or?
sab kharay ho jaain

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thank you so much for the good read Rameesha Jee.... :)

do you mind if I read this on independence day?
is it ok for you if I use this... we are planning an arraingment in café for singing and reading anything we want on independance day...

so if you dont mind... :)


its broken...

Gul shirkat ka shukria, our yeh loo kharhey ho gaye

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[This message has been edited by Rameesha (edited August 01, 2002).]

Hanie Arrey aap ney to mery dil ki baat jaan li :slight_smile: .. maiN soch rahi thi keh apni koyi fav. nazm post karooN our boloN keh koyi useey 14 august key program meiN koyi parh dey ya ga dey.. pochhney ka shukria.. mujee buhat khushi ho gi agar tum parho to

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our bhi aagey nazms post hooN gi so jis ko dil chahey ley key parha :slight_smile:

thank you so much…
if you can PM me those… in 2 days… Jald se Jald … :slight_smile:
I will see wich I can read.. I will have more choice then…

cant wait for them…

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thank you again…


its broken…

Subh-e-aazaadii
ye daaG daaG ujaalaa, ye shab_gaziidaa sahar

ye daaG daaG ujaalaa, ye shab_gaziidaa sahar
wo intazaar thaa jis kaa, ye wo sahar to nahii.n

ye wo sahar to nahii.n jis kii aarazuu lekar
chale the yaar ki mil jaayegii kahii.n na kahii.n
falak ke dasht me.n taro.n kii aaKharii ma.nzil
kahii.n to hogaa shab-e-sust mauj kaa saahil
kahii.n to jaa ke rukegaa safinaa-e-Gam-e-dil
jawaa.N lahuu kii pur-asaraar shaaharaaho.n se
chale jo yaar to daaman pe kitane haath pa.De
dayaar-e-husn kii be-sabr Khwaab-gaaho.n se
pukaratii rahii.n baahe.n, badan bulaate rahe
bahut aziiz thii lekin ruKh-e-sahar kii lagan
bahut qarii.n thaa hasiinaan-e-nuur kaa daaman
subuk subuk thii tamannaa, dabii dabii thii thakan

sunaa hai ho bhii chukaa hai firaq-e-zulmat-e-nuur
sunaa hai ho bhii chukaa hai wisaal-e-ma.nzil-o-gaam
badal chukaa hai bahut ahl-e-dard kaa dastuur
nishaat-e-wasl halaal-o-azaab-e-hijr-e-haraam
jigar kii aag, nazar kii uma.ng, dil kii jalan
kisii pe chaaraa-e-hijraa.N kaa kuchh asar hii nahii.n
kahaa.N se aaii nigaar-e-sabaa, kidhar ko gaii
abhii chiraaG-e-sar-e-rah ko kuchh Khabar hii nahii.n
abhii garaani-e-shab me.n kamii nahii.n aaii
najaat-e-diida-o-dil kii gha.Dii nahii.n aaii
chale chalo ki wo ma.nzil abhii nahii.n aaii

August 1947

(Faiz Ahmad Faiz)

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Hanie pyari larki pleasure is all mine, shukria to mujee kehna chahye keh aap meri khwahish ho pora kar rahi ho :slight_smile:
Rahi baat nazms ki to eik aad yahan post karooN gi our eik aada aap ko PM karney ki koshish karooN gi, baat to sari typing ki he, jo ziada ho hi naheen pati, so dekho kahan tak maiN kamyaab hoti hooN

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Gul jee udaas mat hooN, beshak haal achha naheen he per Rab ney chaha to Inshallah woh subh-e-roshan zaroor taluuh ho gi, lekin is key liye hameen bhi to kochh karna ho ga naaN.. Muhalif samat pe chaltey raheeN our chaheeN keh manzil pe punch jayeeN to aisa to naheen ho sakta.. so humeen khud pehley apni soch apna qabaa durust karna ho ga .. our waisey bhi kehtey haiN jab aandheera had sey barh jaye to samjhiye sehar qareeb he our Allah karey aisa hi ho …:slight_smile:
our haaN jari rakhye kaam, buhat umdaa ja rahi haiN

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Eik our fav. nazm jo buhat arsey sey post karna chahti thi per kabhi kar naheen payii, her cheez apney waqt pe injam pati he so is ney shayed is dhagey ki zeenat banana tha :)... yeh bhi A.IA ka hi eik masterpiece he, A.I.A ko yeh hunar hasil he, juzbooN ko aisa roop bakhshtey haiN keh lagta he yeh bhi mery dil meiN he ...

**Aye zameen-e-watan hum gunhegaar haiN

Hun gunh-e-gaar haiN
Aye zameen-e-watan hum gunh-e-gaar haiN
Hum ney nazmooN mein tery chamaktey hoye bam-o-dar key betaab qissey likhey
phool chehrooN pe shabnum si ghazleeN kaheeN, khwaab aankhooN key khushboo qaseedey likhey
terey khaitooN ki faslooN ko sona gina, teri galiyooN meiN dil key jareedey likhey
jin ko khud apni aankhooN sey dekha naheeN, hum ney teri jabeeN pe woh lahmey likhey
jo tassawur key lashker meiN larhtey rahey
hum woh salaar haiN
aye zameen-e-watan hum guh-e-gaar haiN

Jagti aankh sey khwaab dekhey, unheen apni marzi ki tabeer detey rahey
hum tery baarwar mousmooN key liye bad-e-sar sar meiN taseer detey rahey
hum aandherey manazir ko roshan dinooN ki umeedooN sey tanweer detey rahey
tery sahil ki aazadiyooN key liye hum talatum ko zanjeer detey rahey
jo humeesha tujhey aarzoo key jharookey sey taktey rahey
hum woh fankaar haiN
aye zameen-e-watan hum guh-e-gaar haiN

Aye zameen-e-watan hum gunh-e-gaar haiN, hum tery dukh samunder sey ghafil rahey
tery chehry ki rounaq dhuaaN ho gayi, hum raheen-e-ghum-e-dil rahey
zulm key ruhbaruu lab kushayi nah ki, is tarah zalimooN meiN bhi shamil rahey
hashar-aawar dinooN meiN jo sooeye rahey
hum woh bedaar haiN
aye zameen-e-watan hum gunh-e-gaar haiN

Jab tery zard partey hoye mousmooN ko mehkti shafak ki zaroorat parhi
Hum ney apna lahoo aazmaya naheen*sigh*
teri khushboo sakooN ki tamanna liye aandhiyooN key jaloo meiN bhatakti rahi
Hun ney roka naheen
Teri mitti nigahooN nigahooN meiN badal liye khushk mousam key rastey mein bethi rahi
hum ney dil ko sumander banaya naheen
Teri izzat zamaney key bazar meiN dil jalati boliyooN pe biki
hum ney kanooN meiN seesa utara naheen
Hum gunh-e-gaar haiN

Aye zameen-e-watan tujh ko to ilm he, loog kyooN dar-e-rah-e-mulamat howey
Jin muhafiz dushmanooN key alam tery roshan lahoo ki shahadat howey
Hum bhi un ki siyaasat key nakhcheer haiN, aasteenooN key jo saanp sabit hoye
hum bhi teri tarah sazishooN ki hawa key gireftaar haiN
Hum gunh-e-haar haiN

Hum gunh-e-gaar haiN, aye zameen-e-watan per qasam he hameen apney ajdaad ki
sarhadooN sey bulatey howey khoon ki, apni behnooN ki hurmat ki, aulaad ki
haan qasam he hameen aaney waley dinooN ki, our aankhooN meiN thehri hoyi yaad ki

Ab muhafiz numaa dushmanooN key alam
un key kaley lahoo sey bhagoeeN gey hum
Tery daman pe ruswaooN key nishaaN
apney aansooN sey dhooeeN gey hum
Aakhri martaba aye mataey-e-nazar
aaj apney gunahooN pe roeeN gey hum
Teri aanhkhooN meiN ab aye nigar-e-watan
sharam-sari key aansoo naheen aayeeN gey
Hum ko teri qasam aye bahar-e-watan
ab aandhery safar ko nah duhrayeeN gey
Gar kissi ney tery sath dhooka kiya to woh koyi bhi ho
Us key rastey ki diwaar ban jaeeN gey
Jaan dey kar tera naam kar jaeeN gey**

[This message has been edited by Rameesha (edited August 02, 2002).]

umm hanie baji nay enough bata dia hia... ramesha ham i guess gupshup ki chat main yeh singing wagaira ka show kuch karain.. aap apni nazam hanie ko post kardo.. wo aap ke liay ap ka naam lai kar read kardaingi aap ka naam lai kar..

ya phir aap khud bhi apni voice post karsecty ho...

anwyay.... agar os din aap nay koi bhi song sunna ho.. real singer ya kisi bhi guppy ki voice mcian u can leave a msg in my 14th aug thread @ cafe.... v will play that song for u..

theeekk.. or if u have any suggestion plzz do so..v need it..

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaer hooN…

Mahsllaah bohjaat kHoob all

Tarane my passion amin bhi koi DhooNdtaa hooN

ammal bhai mujhee aapka Taranaa kHas taur per passand aiaya
aur Hanie Paksar zameen to dil meiN bassa hai Thanx for sharing it again

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school yaaad agaiya thanx

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Rameshaa jee nice

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Beautiful Thread Rameesha jee :)

I'll try to contribute something in the next couple of days, InshaAllah.

wowwwwwwww beautifull

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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** jug jug jiye mera pyara watan
lub pay dua hai dil main lagan

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

PP thanks for info.. kya aap shirkat naheen kareeN gi yahan

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Khuda karey meri Arz-e-Pak per utrey
Woh fasl-e-gul jisey aandeesha-e-zawal nah ho
(Aameen Summa Aameen)

Amal jee buhat umdaa, aisi hi khobsorat selection key sath rounaq bakhshtey rahye :slight_smile:
btw: yeh aap wali duaa main ney aakhri din post karney socha tha our aap

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… khair achha howa aap ney post kar di, mery paas pori naheen thi, thankoo

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Tassneef jee thanks & aap ka intezar he :slight_smile:

Gul eik baar phir buhat aala, yunhi aati rahye

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~Sehar~ jee khushi hoyi aap ko yahan dekh ker our shukria .. aap ki shikat ka bhi intezar rahey ga :slight_smile:

CC sirf tareef sey kaam naheen chaley ga bas jaldi sey kochh post kijiye

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CC aaa mery post likhtey hi aap ney post kar bhi di .. thanks, buhat pyara.. .. aaj abhi yeh wala millinaghma TV pe sun rahi thi, socha tha post karney ka, aap hi yeh wala pora post kar do ...our yeh pehla our aakhri nah sabit ho, aati rahye ga :)

**Kabhi kamsini meiN
Watan ki muhabbat sey sarshaar ho kar
yeh dawaa kiya tha
keh zinda raha to
maiN khak-e-watan ka her ik zarra chamka ky roshan karooN ga
main maang-e-watan mein ujaley bharooN ga
kabhi zindgi meiN yeh dawaa kiya tha
keh jab bhi watan ko zaroorat parhey gi
main apney lahoo key charaghooN sey andhey aandherooN ko ghaail karooN ga
main apni wafa key gulabooN ko is tour mehkaooN ga
keh phir mushk-o-amber bhi is mehak ko aa key sajdey karey gi

Kabhi zindgi mein koyi dawaa bhi harf-e-aakhir naheen he
lutafat kheyalooN ki bas eik takhayyul
aadhoora sa sapna
zara aankh kholooN to yooN toot jaye
keh jaisey koyi kaanch ka aabgeena
Mera aabgeena bhi ik thais sey tukrhey tukhrey howa to
takhayyul ki her roo
kissi our hi samt behney lagi
tabhi main ney socha

MaiN maang-e-watan meiN ujaley bharooN ga to kaisey bharooN ga
mery hath meiN
aabley to haiN koyi tara naheen
mery tareek kamrey ki dewarooN per
ik kiran bhi naheen
koyi khirhki naheen koyi rozan naheen
our bhagooyi hoyi khushk roti key tukrhey
halaq meiN kaheeN ja key phansaney lagey
main watan mein goyaa be-watan ho geya

Our watan sey buhat door jaa key kabhi bhool ker bhi nah socha
keh mery watan ko zaroorat he meri
Magar aaj jab
eik nanney sey bachey key kehney per main
"Hubbul-watni" pe chand jumley likhney laga hooN
to janey kahaN sey koyi mehak si aa key mehkaa gayi he
kori matti key peyalooN meiN bheegey gulabooN ki khushboo he
ya aasmanooN sey aati hoyi mehak he
yeh mehak, meri dharti ki maanoos si yeh mehak
ajnabi dees meiN muj ko tarhpaa gayi he
our maiN
jo ajnabi sarzameeN meiN yooN khoo geya tha
keh koyi bhi bulawa, koyi bhi sandeesa
mujee chhuu nah paye
mujee sahilooN ki taraf ley nah jaye

Sochta hooN
bhegooii hoyi khushk roti ki lazzat to kochh our thi
cetlas-o-sandwich is pe qurban hooN
our munh meiN mery cetlas-o-sandwich bemaza ho gaye

Aye watan tuu ney jab bhi pukara mujee
lout aaooN ga maiN
keh koyi harf bhi
harf-e-aakhir naheeN**