ahann ic:ahaa:
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kuch pocha to nahi police ne ap se:p ap ne koi raat jail mein to nahi guzaree na;)![]()
oh ic.to abhi tak tumharee zindagee her ghum se door hai.veryyyy lucky mano85:hug: khusse raho:)
aur bhi ghum hain zamanay main mohabbat k siwa :~)
Gazal kisi ke
Woh raat to humari hawalat main ** guzree **
Koi yeh batlay ghazal ke dil par kia ** guzree **
Azad ab bhi waqt hay moq moqa kar lay
Nahein koi aisii “Dil Chorni”, kaii saal main ** guzree **
Adab
kahan ho tum shab e intezaar ** guzree ** hay
Talash main hay police char(4) bar ** guzree ** hay
(original shair)
hummmmmmmmmmm mano kia baat hai ap ke:)![]()
chalo mein to duaa kartee hoon ke tum hamesha khusse raho:)
azad ap mera naam …
ghazal kisi ke
well thanks for the sher:flower1:
Sir or deewar kay milnay say naseeb nahi miltay
Kisi ko phool bhaijnay say sitaaray nahi miltay
Aisa hota to dunia main koi deewar nah milti
UjaR halon ko phir say umeed e bahar nah milti
Adab.
bhai sub ko pata hay aap ** Azad Nazm ** nahi ho .. ** Gazal kisi ke ** ho ... khush?
Ok enjoy poetry on Gup Shup hum to barish main bheegnay chalay
thanks :~)
kia baat hai azad ap ke:k::k:nice shermein to khuss reh he nahi saktee:(
barish mein kia karne jaa rahaeoo ho?bemar ho jaoo gay:D
u welcome always:hug:
Nice to see someone happy... great
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barish mein kia karne jaa rahaeoo ho?bemar ho jaoo gay :D
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koi aisi waisi ** Kali ** zuban paii hay aap nay ... :(
** Bemaray mohabat aur kiya beemar hoon gay **
thanks dilsay(if u were saying to me)![]()
dekh lo kise kise ko miltee hain:smooth: yeh sharf bhi sirf mujhe hansel hai;) ![]()
woh aik sher hai na..
~~mere zilat mere dostoon ke siwa aur koi kar nahi sakta
yeh sharf bhi srif mere dostoon ko hanzel hain
waise hoaa kia p ko?![]()
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
** Bemaray mohabat aur kiya beemar hoon gay **
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baja farmaia ap ne:):D i agree with u:)
Aik Azad ko bad'duain, baqi sub ki balain
Kis kis sitam ka qissa, hum tum ko sunain
Sham e Ghazal main hum ne, ** Gazal kisi ke ** jo paRhi
Gonjj uThi her taraf say, wah wah ki sadain.
Adab
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Originally posted by Azad: *
Aik Azad ko bad'duain, baqi sub ki balain
Kis kis sitam ka qissa, hum tum ko sunain
Sham e Ghazal main hum ne, * Gazal kisi ke ** jo paRhi
Gonjj uThi her taraf say, wah wah ki sadain.
Adab
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Wah wah
Phir kisi ke gazal na parh na... mar behi par saktee hi ;)
wah wah wah!!
very nice:k::k:
shukria:)
ap mera naam kab shaee likein gay.mein intazar karoon gee;)ghazal kisi ke
waise ap mujhe koi sa bhi sitam bata deen mein zaror sunoo gee:)
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sahee kaha ap ne:)
ap in ka khial rakha karein:)kaheen aik rooz pata chale ke hamare azad jee hospital mein hain(allah na karae)![]()