Kitty
December 20, 2002, 6:00pm
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how Ironic, I jioned b4 u yet u r welcoming me… :birgrin: thnx
here’s a beautiful poem from wasi shah again:
Zidd
Janay kiyoon pundra(15) ka tanha
Aur udaasi pehnay chaand
Mujh ko acha lagta hai
shayad yoon..
K chodah(14) tu ab meri zidd hai
Qk chodah ka khush chand
Us ko acha lagta hai ..!
*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
**Sochta hoon ke ussay neend bhi aati hogi **
Sochta hoon ke ussay neend bhi aati hogi
Ya meri tarha faqat ashk bahaati hogi
Woh meri shakl mera naam bhulaanay waali
Apni tasveer se kya aankh milaati hogi
Is zameen per bhi hai sailaab mere ashkoon se
Mere maatam ki sada arsh hilaati hogi
Shaam hotay hi woh chaukhat pe jala kar sham’ein
Apni palkoon pe kaee khwaab salati hogi
Us ne silwa bhi liye honge seyyah rang libaas
Ab muharram ki tarha eid manaati hogi
Dil ki masoom raggain khud hi sulaghti hongi
Junhi tasveer ka kona woh jalaati hogi
alfaaz ke qamee hai mere pass.
but its very beautiful:k::k::k:
Re: Very nice
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Very nice and why not to share really.....
keep it up
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if u r saying to me then thnanks a lot:)
*Aaj yun mausam ne di jashn-e-muhabbat ki khabar *
Aaj yun mausam ne di jashn-e-muhabbat ki khabar
Phoot kar ronay lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Hum ne junhi kar liya mehsoos manzil hai qareeb
Raastay khone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Chaand ki kirnoo ne hum ko is tarha bosa diya
Devta hone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Aaj phir mehroomeyoon ki daastanain orh kar
Khaak mein sone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Kho gaye andaaz bhi, awaaz bhi, alfaaz bhi
Khamoshi dhondne lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
*Originally posted by Kitty: *
how Ironic, I jioned b4 u yet u r welcoming me… :birgrin: thnx
here’s a beautiful poem from wasi shah again:
Zidd
Janay kiyoon pundra(15) ka tanha
Aur udaasi pehnay chaand
Mujh ko acha lagta hai
shayad yoon..
K chodah(14) tu ab meri zidd hai
Qk chodah ka khush chand
Us ko acha lagta hai ..!
well i didn’t see ur posts so thats why i didn’t say u welcome:)and u welcome
and that poem is perfect:k:
thanks a lot for the poem and for the flower:flower1:
*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
**Aaj yun mausam ne di jashn-e-muhabbat ki khabar **
Aaj yun mausam ne di jashn-e-muhabbat ki khabar
Phoot kar ronay lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Hum ne junhi kar liya mehsoos manzil hai qareeb
Raastay khone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Chaand ki kirnoo ne hum ko is tarha bosa diya
Devta hone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Aaj phir mehroomeyoon ki daastanain orh kar
Khaak mein sone lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
Kho gaye andaaz bhi, awaaz bhi, alfaaz bhi
Khamoshi dhondne lagay hain mein, muhabbat aur tum
one of my fav:flower1:
thanks
Mano85
December 21, 2002, 9:22am
28
[QUOTE]
Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
**Sochta hoon ke ussay neend bhi aati hogi *
Sochta hoon ke ussay neend bhi aati hogi
Ya meri tarha faqat ashk bahaati hogi
Woh meri shakl mera naam bhulaanay waali
Apni tasveer se kya aankh milaati hogi
Is zameen per bhi hai sailaab mere ashkoon se
Mere maatam ki sada arsh hilaati hogi
Shaam hotay hi woh chaukhat pe jala kar sham'ein
Apni palkoon pe kaee khwaab salati hogi
Us ne silwa bhi liye honge seyyah rang libaas
Ab muharram ki tarha eid manaati hogi
Dil ki masoom raggain khud hi sulaghti hongi
Junhi tasveer ka kona woh jalaati hogi
[/QUOTE]
just thought of completing the ghazal :~)
hoti hogi meray bosay ki talab main pagal
jab bhi zulfo'n main koi phool sajaati hogi
meray tareek zamano'n se nikalnay wali
roshni tujhko meri yaad dilati hogi
roop dey kar mujhay usmain kisi shehzaday ka
apnay bacho'n ko kahani woh sunaati hogi
Azad
December 21, 2002, 9:32am
29
teri talash main police bhi kaii bar guzree :)
u have sucha good taste, thanks for sharing
Mano85
December 21, 2002, 9:32am
30
yeh bhi mumkin hai kisi roz na pehchaanu'n usay
woh jo har baar naya bhais badal leta hai
baarha mujhse kaha tha meray yaaro'n ne wasi
ishq darya hai jo bacho'n ko nigal leta hai!
Azad
December 21, 2002, 3:50pm
31
Andhairi raat main rehtay to kitna acha tha
Hum apni zaat main rehtay to kitna acha tha
Dukhon nay banT liya hay tumharay bad humain
Tumharay haat main rehtay to kitna acha tha
WASI SHAH
nikii
December 21, 2002, 10:20pm
33
wowwwwwwwwwwww
zabersatt :k: :k:
ecellent threaddd **ghazal kisi ki **
*Originally posted by Mano85: *
just thought of completing the ghazal :~)
hoti hogi meray bosay ki talab main pagal
jab bhi zulfo’n main koi phool sajaati hogi
meray tareek zamano’n se nikalnay wali
roshni tujhko meri yaad dilati hogi
roop dey kar mujhay usmain kisi shehzaday ka
apnay bacho’n ko kahani woh sunaati hogi
bohut acha kia ap ne jo is ghazal ko pora kar diya:)
:k:
*Originally posted by Azad: *
teri talash main police bhi kaii bar guzree
u have sucha good taste, thanks for sharing
thanks a lot Azad:flower1:but i dont get ur first line:confused:
*Originally posted by Mano85: *
yeh bhi mumkin hai kisi roz na pehchaanu’n usay
woh jo har baar naya bhais badal leta hai
baarha mujhse kaha tha meray yaaro’n ne wasi
ishq darya hai jo bacho’n ko nigal leta hai!
wow mano85:k::k:its beautiful
apka woh ketnea bhais badalta hai:mudhosh:
thansk a lot
nikki
capricorn
azad
and dilsay u too:)
Azad
December 22, 2002, 6:55am
39
[QUOTE]
thanks a lot Azadbut i dont get ur first line
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Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke:
her aik shub mere taza aazab mein ** guzaree **
tumhare baad tumhare hee khuwb mein ** guzaree **
mein aik pohl hoon woh mujhe ko rakh ke bohl gaya
tamam umar usee ke ketab mein ** guzaree **
teri talash main police bhi kaii bar ** guzree ** (j/k)
Mano85
December 22, 2002, 5:42pm
40
pehlay aanay to do, phir pata chalayga naa