- Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar -

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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[COLOR=darkred]YaadoN kaY diye hum naY jalaaye thaY raat bhar
Da’m-e-Subah yooN lagaa bujhaaye thaY raat bhar

DekhtaY rahai chaaNd saY baadal kee AThkheliyaaN
Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar

Pheli huee, falak par unn zulmatoN kaY paar
kokab-e-Seh’r kee aah aur naalaY thaY raat bhar

Jungle maiN ajab ehsaas-e-wehshat kaY darmiyaaN
baRhtaY rahai ashjaar kaY saaye thaY raat bhar

Pau phaTTi tau falakbos pahaaRoN kee auTT saY
Taa’ir jamaa huaY, jo ghabraaYe thaY raat bhar

BhoolaY Khushtagaan-e-Shab, manzil-e-maqsood kaa suraagh
nishaaN-e-rah-guzar Anwaar naY samjhaaYe thaY raat bhar

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:lajawab:Correction was so quick Anno:wink:

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quick? matlab :)?

oh correction.. yeah I was having a little problem with html usage here.. :slight_smile:

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Anjan banny ki inteha hy I am talking about[size=] :hehe: That was clean as I quote like lightning:D[/size]

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Both R more then quick here:rotfl:
Waisy Ashaar ky lajwab hony main bhi koi shak nahi:k:

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Nice

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goodnews.. it's about the poem, not how quick I am editing my entries because I was experiencing formatting issues :)

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lol

lobly

:)

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Buhat sy logon ko yeh issu darpysh hota hy or aksar woh kai totky bhi sunty hain I know:( Ashaary Aalia ki tareef kr tu di hy:naraz:

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Thanks :slight_smile:

shukriya

LOL.. you are also a quick editor :stuck_out_tongue:

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DekhtaY rahai chaaNd saY baadal kee AThkheliyaaN
Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar

Pheli huee, falak par unn zulmatoN kaY paar
kokab-e-Seh’r kee aah aur naalaY thaY raat bhar

Jungle maiN ajab ehsaas-e-wehshat kaY darmiyaaN
baRhtaY rahai ashjaar kaY saaye thaY raat bhar

Pau phaTTi tau falakbos pahaaRoN kee auTT saY
Taa’ir jamaa huaY, jo ghabraaYe thaY raat bhar

really mai very nice :k:

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Ap ki suhbat main din rat rehty hain asar tu ho ga:barbie:

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^
theek hai phir ustaadoN kee izzat kiyaa karo :barbie:

Thanks C C :)
most undefined things of girls
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Again good work Aq. :)

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Main ny “suhbat ka asar” kaha hy “Ustad ky dandon” ka asar nahi:p Waisy yeh ap apny ap ko “usatdon” main kab sy shumar krny lagy :hehe:

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[quote=““Anwaar Qureshi””]

YaadoN kaY diye hum naY jalaaye thaY raat bhar
Da’m-e-Subah yooN lagaa bujhaaye thaY raat bhar

DekhtaY rahai chaaNd saY baadal kee AThkheliyaaN
Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar

Jungle maiN ajab ehsaas-e-wehshat kaY darmiyaaN
baRhtaY rahai ashjaar kaY saaye thaY raat bhar

Anwaar Qureshi
August 3, 2007

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Anwaar umda ^ aashaar heiN Barri jaldi ghazal mukammal kar li :k:

Anwaar sheir bohat khoobsoorat laga mujhey. Lekin baqi ghazal sey isey alag is leeye kiya ke baaqi aashaar ke saath ye chal nahi paa raha. Zameen wohi hey, lekin is ka wazan mujhey baaqi aashaar sey kuch barrha huwa laga. Lekin alag sey dikhney meiN ye sheir bohat khoobsoorat laga mujhey :~)

Aur ye sheir is leeye alag kiya kiuNke it deserves to stand out because of being outstanding. Zameen to kheir aek hi chal rahi hey, wazan ke lehaaz sey bhi ye bohat umda sheir hey lekin maanvi tanaa’zur meiN deikha jaey to it’s the cream of the ghazal.

Aek behtareen kaavish ke leeye :flower1: :slight_smile:

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very nice AQ. lagta hai ap ko pehlay hi ilham ho gaya tha k subha kia honay wala hai :P

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buss ho gayi! :bummer: ghalati ho gayi. muaaf kar dau yaar.. bhai naheeN ho :smiley:

Yeah I was feeling that too.. in fact, I had to revise it many times, but I wanted to use it as proper maqta, so I was trying to put my name… the first misra’ was getting either too short or too long… but it feels longer too because of roman alphabets… try reading out loud the one before it and then this one:hmmm: itnaa farq naheeN lagtaa… agar aap taseeh kar dau tau koi muzaaiqaa naheeN :clown:

perhaps, because, the only place you find glimpse of hope is in this :wink:

hahaha.. nice observation :hehe: and thanks…

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u r welcome :D

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I did try that :slight_smile: It’s a standard formula for my own writings as well :slight_smile: