~~ usney kha mjhe say @@

" Usney kaha mujh say !
Main tum bin jee na paoungi
Main sach much toot jaoungi
Zamana chor doungi !
Khud se janan rooth jaoungi

Main ne kaha us sey !
Agar main mil gaya tumko
To is se farq kiya hoga ?
Mohobat main hamesha jo mila hai
Wo juda hua hai !

Usney kaha mujh se!
Agar tum mil gaey mujhko
Main yeh duniya bhula doungi
Tumhare naam pe apna main ye jiwani bita doungi
Tumhari zindagi ka main her ek lamha saja doungi
Tumhara marte dum tuk sath doungi jan luta doungi

*Maine kaha us se *
*Meri jan sach kahon tumse *
*Yeh wade, sapne, jhoote hain *
*Hamain tanha hi rehna hai *
*Saharey apne jhootay hain *
*Ager main mil gaya tumko *
*Mujeh tum chor jaugi *
*Mera dil keh raha hai tum ! *
*Mera dil tor jaugi *

Usney kaha mujh se !
Ager tum mil na paey to
Main aisa kar bhi sakti hon
Tumhare bin adhuri hon
Main janan mar bhi sakti hon

Main ne kaha us se !
Yeh janan sub hi karte hain
Safar main sub bicharte hain
Bichar kar log martey hain
Mujhe tum jee k dikhayyo !!!

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Did u write this??

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nah

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very nice.....awesome.....

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hmm gud 1 :k:

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iss mai rhythm kum hai..i duno poetry ki zaban mai usay kya kehtay hain..hashmat sahee explain ker sakta hai...oh yeah wazan kum hai sentences mai...

but i liked the poetry...wordings are very touchy...

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^ i was expecting this from ... or g wazan to braber hai ........the thing u r talking abt is know as leh .... i agree us mai thori si kemi hai .... pr still.. i liked it .. so posted it ....

ghaltion se aagaah kerna mera farz tha:p

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galti to koi b nakal skta hai ..... nothingis perfect u c .......... baat tab achi lagti hai .. jab glati k sath us ka solution b diya gayee .... hehe

solution y hai ainda post na kiya jae :p

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i got a better solution ... app apni mehrana rayee apni pass hi rkhe or khud hi is say mustfeed ho....... lolz

:sadaf:

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nhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ... dnt shoot .......u r rite ...... brii fazool si nazam hai .. bas khush

ab tou goli nikal gayi gum se:(..bohat daer ker di aap ne atay atay :p

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shuker hai gum say nikli hai .. mai to dar giya tha k kehi GUN say to nhi nikal gayee .. haha...dair aya but drust aya nah ... hehe

hahahahahahhahahahahahah.......ab itni b akal nahi maari gayi;)

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akal hoti to hi marii jati nah ...lucky u ...wink

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awesome :k:

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:@:

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nice one