us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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aa’nkheN khuli to jaag uthi has’RateiN tamaam
us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Aap ka collection tu tabah-kun huta hay Koyal… awesome indeed…

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Yes, call FBI :smiley:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Aap ki selection ki taareef karna to goya sooraj ko chiraagh dikhaney ke mutraadif hey. Aa gaey ho tey cha gaey ho :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

asi tey atey he haiN cha janaY k leay ..kabhi koyal ko uRtey dekha hai mu upeR kaRo tu lagta hai wo chaie huwei hain asmana’oo ki wustooN maiN :stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

thanks fara ap ka zoaq acha hai waRna pRindi kis qabil :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

lagta hia FBi ki degree b ap ne lay he lee :stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

lol @ Prindi… khsuh-zoaq tu aap hain hee… khush-mizaaj bhee lagti hain…

Aap kay liyee aik misra zehan main aa raha hay…

woh urray ga apni he moaj main, ussay aab day ya sarab day…

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Koi nahi… main nay bar-mahal chunao kiya hay is laffz ka… ayee FBi beech main kithooN aa gayee ayee..

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

FBI ki to nahi, haaN koi aur degree zaroor li hey :slight_smile:

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Nice1 :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

**bahot umda she’r hai. shaayad ek aur she’e thaa aisaa hii kuchh k:

kah kar gaye the k shab ko mileNge Khaab meN
tab se palak mili nahiiN palak se intizaar meN

aap meN se kisi ko yeh she’r iskii asli haiyat meN yaad hai?**

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Koyal Very hi nice :k: achay achay sher post kerti raha karein :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

batna pasand faRmaieN gain ap :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

thanks ap ne acha sherR suna pRindi k leay i like it :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

very nice.

Khawab na dekhaan karein. :smiley:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

ab khawab he tu rah gaye haiN dekhnay k leay original aj kal kahaN :stuck_out_tongue:

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nice

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Bhut achi :slight_smile:

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Re: us ko bhi kho diya jisay paya tha khuab maiN

Good One** Koyal**..