IS
December 20, 2006, 10:07pm
1
**people share ur own written very first piece of poetry like shiar, ghazal, nazm etc
This was mine very first try
**mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon **mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon
nahi karta intazar waqat! kesi ka mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon
**lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay **
**jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam **
**muj say jitna be ho Naraz wo aay dil **mein usay hameesha khush deakhna chata hoon
By:- Imarn Afzal
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Innocent_Smile:
**people share ur own written very first piece of poetry like shiar, ghazal, nazm etc
This was mine very first try
**mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon **mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon
nahi karta intazar waqat! kesi ka mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon
**lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay **
**jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam **
**muj say jitna be ho Naraz wo aay dil **mein usay hameesha khush deakhna chata hoon
By:- Imarn Afzal
wonderful:) innocent smile kamal kia he lagta he meri soch chora li u ne:naraz:
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
wow.
kub likhi thi - is it recent?
ded9211
December 21, 2006, 3:11am
4
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
When he was a child:D
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
here is a poem i just thought of i call it 'lead salad'... :)
dont you just love the sound of machine gun
shells just flying out and bouncing across the
floor? people running and shrapnel flying in different
directions! bombs going off, planes nose diving down
tanks blasting away and ships sinking on the shores...
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
very beautiful
fizkhan
December 23, 2006, 5:19am
7
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
just wanna share my own chotti si nazam hope u'll like it.
***koi dinn to aisa ho.....
koi din to aisa ho
nazam by fiz khan
fizkhan
December 23, 2006, 5:19am
8
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
here's another one...
MUJHEY TUMSEY MOHABBAT HAI....
Mujhey tumsey mohabbat hai
kabhi chup caap si baarish mein
kisi maahroo ki bahon mein
nazam by fiz khan
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Masha’ALLAH excellent nazms people! keep up the good work! i think i still need to work on my wording! LOL!
fizkhan
December 23, 2006, 5:30am
10
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
hey crescent its nt like improving ur wordings....jst keep on writing wot u think n feel n wish ......u'll b automatically polished inshALLAH
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Jazakh’ALLAH Khair i agree! I used to write alot of poems which were sweet, this one i wrote here was just a joke though lol!
fizkhan
December 23, 2006, 7:49am
12
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
MASHALLAH.....its nice 2 ve ktharsis in dis way dear.:)
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
hmmm................great poem imran bhai...keep it up!
IS
December 25, 2006, 3:30am
15
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Sukriya mai nay kaha churaie hay
IS
December 25, 2006, 3:32am
16
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
**Thanks
**4-1/2 saaal pehlay **
IS
December 25, 2006, 3:34am
17
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
ded9211:
When he was a child:D
**aap ko kesay pata chala:hoonh: **
Amal
December 25, 2006, 11:50am
18
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Merey pehley 2 aashaar, I somehow clearly remember to be mine first two
1: **Dunya-daari karo jesey kartey the Hazoor
2: **Sooraj nikla chai dhoop
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
Masha'ALLAH i see alot of talent, good work everyone! :)
Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry
does it have to b in urdu?
**
khud a jaiay to usay churana nai kehte 