Ur own very first piece of poetry

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry

@Innocent_Smile

This was mine very first try :-)

mian har chooot kay baad sabalna chata hoon ** **mien tumhara hoon tumhara banna chata hoon

nahi karta intazar waqat! kesi ka mien waqat ke is rawish ko badalna chata hoon

*lota doon wo lamhay jo meray sirf meray thay * *mien un lamhoon ko qaid karna chata hoon *

*jaha dukh ho na dard ho ayr na ho koi gam * *logoo mien ik esa jahan dhondna chata hoon *

muj say jitna be ho Naraz wo aay dil ** **mein usay hameesha khush deakhna chata hoon

By:- Imarn Afzal

First try tou buhat sweet sii hey:~)

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry

@Amal

Merey pehley 2 aashaar, I somehow clearly remember to be mine first two

1: Dunya-daari karo jesey kartey the Hazoor
**koshish karo tootney na paeiN Hazoor ke dastoor **

2: Sooraj nikla chai dhoop
**deikho sooraj ke aur bhi roop **
Don’t laugh, acha

:k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: Ur own very first piece of poetry

Here is my first piece of poetry. I wrote this back in 2002/2003.

@ghazal kisi ke

woh janta hai in sawaloon kay jawab magar phir be woh aksar yahee sawal pochta hai mujh say kion tumhare zaat, tumhara khail bekhar gaya hai? kion chohr diyay hain tum nay khuwab dekhnay? kion her aik kay liyay sawal sa ban gaye ho? kion muskarnay per bhi aa jatay hain ansoo aankhon main? kion dil hai tota tota sa, kion rehte ho kohye kohye se? kion pata hoon her mehfil main udaas tumhain? kion tanhayon say piyar sa ho gaya hai tumhain? kion meltay hain sokhay hoyay gulab tumhare ketaboon mein? kion pasand hai tumhain andehro’n main behtna? kion pasand hai tumhain kanton pay chalna? kion bujha date ho jaltay hoyay charaigh umeed kay? kion khail hai tumhein zamany ka itna? bus aisay he khabhi khabhi woh kehta hai mujhay kay kion kehte ho hum dono hain nadee kay who do kenaray jo sath sath to umar bahr chaltay hain per khabhi nahi miltay jin kay darmia’n hai dunia, asool aur rakh-rakhao pane ke manind ..