--- Un-kahay lafzouN kee Baaz gasht maiN ---

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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hummm Pehli bar pharrain gay to dobara pharrnay ki nobat aay gi na :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
hummm Pehli bar pharrain gay to dobara pharrnay ki nobat aay gi na :)
[/QUOTE]
paRRhaa naheeN jub hee tau mazaa naheeN aayaa :)

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meri nazam kho gai wesey bhi woh fil badee thee:bummer:

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Re: — Un-kahay lafzouN kee Baaz gasht maiN —

Waooooo:(

i’m speechless:k:

apnay dil say ab muhabbat kar beThaa hooN maiN
haaN shaayad ghud gharz bunn beThaa hooN maiN

:frowning:

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umm tishoon??? Aiy ki Aiy? U lost me paajee… Tarajma tey naal Tashreeh ker k deyo hun :snooty:

zindagi haar kar tajurbaa lay beThaa hooN maiN

Main thori late ho gayi , kia hai na k main bhi shayad zindagi haar rahi thi.. anyhow
as always Excellent words and very well expressed … :slight_smile:

Allah Keray Zor-e-Qalam aur zaida… :wave:

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ur welcome :halo:

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AQ ..... Long time now ...... Wat happened 2.....
Gs is sunsaan .....shabbo k baghair lolzzz

jab tak shabbo thee mumtaaz ki kahani main Dum tha ab .....

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Yea I opened a thread in the cafe about him, but someone deleted it. :mad2:

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actually not bad really... :p

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good:)

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wonderful Job AQ!!
Some lines that I like:

and I can relate to this one :slight_smile:

so true!!
:k:

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beautiful porm Anwaar bhai… :k:..

:flower1:..

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Re: — Un-kahay lafzouN kee Baaz gasht maiN —

felt like reading it again and again i enjoyed reading it:k: :flower1:

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BEAUTIFUL!!! :love:
MASHALLAH keep up the great work!

sub kuch seh letaa hooN abb
haNs kar aankhaiN pher laitaa hooN maiN :love:

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wow great anwar bhai

well written

and last two lines r so TANHAA

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Haaa Lost in SPACE …

shabbo :frowning:

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Re: --- Un-kahay lafzouN kee Baaz gasht maiN ---

MY Favorite parts in this section would be these: :-)

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *

Un-kahay lafzouN kee Baaz gasht maiN
Tanha hujoom kee ronaqouN maiN
Koray kaaghaz par
likhay lafzouN kee
talkh yaadouN kay pur sukoon
mazmoon kee gehraaiiyouN maiN:

Ik rishtaa joR beTha thaa maiN
kuch umeedaiN baandh beThaa thaa maiN

sub kuch seh letaa hooN abb
haNs kar aankhaiN pher laitaa hooN maiN

apnay dil say ab muhabbat kar beThaa hooN maiN
haaN shaayad khud gharz bunn beThaa hooN maiN

--- Anwaar
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rabika : Try to recollect your thoughts and come up with that poem again :slight_smile:

ghazliii : thanks ghazaloooooooooooo :hug:

Nickless : kiyaa huvaa paa jee :frowning: May ALLAH :swt: give you strength and shower His blessings on you forever… :flower1:

Rani Pakistani : I am welcome? LOL.. okay… very philosophical answer LOL..

Lamhay : thanks mumtaaz :stuck_out_tongue:

WiseGuy : oh bhai! hint lay liyaa karo when threads disappear that way hahaha

proudpakistani007 : lagtaa hai u understood completely; so now u have to write the tashreeh of it :stuck_out_tongue:

MANAN : thanks dost!

Rukhsarbibi : glad to know that my thoughts are near to reality :=)

HeArT HaCKeR : shukriyaa chandaa :slight_smile:

ghazliii : stop reading depress karnay waali cheezaiN mad12324324353

kino : so u still like that shair, eh? :-d

Aabi : It’s an honour for me to reply to you twice in the same thread… must say you have a great taste in poetry, yet TANHAA shair have the company of great people like u :~)

Lamhay : not really lost dear :stuck_out_tongue:

pagaal : those are my favorites too wink

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how u been? anyways welcome back bud. we really missed ur lovely poetry. hope everythings ok :wave:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
**rabika :* Try to recollect your thoughts and come up with that poem again :)

[/QUOTE]

No! I wont:-)

n haan welcome bak:-)