hmmm Alfaaz ka Chunao bohat khoob kiya hai lekin kuch na kuch kami hai.. na nazm ka ta'sur hai na Ghazal ka :-p new cheez ejaad kar rahi haiN ?
koshish jaari rakhiye
khush rahiye
hmmm Alfaaz ka Chunao bohat khoob kiya hai lekin kuch na kuch kami hai.. na nazm ka ta'sur hai na Ghazal ka :-p new cheez ejaad kar rahi haiN ?
koshish jaari rakhiye
khush rahiye
g bilkul theek kaha Gul..mujhe b ye koi or he cheez lag rhi hai or jis kami ki taraf ap ka ishara hai,main b wazan main bohat kami mehsoos ker rhi hun..thanx for the good wishes:)
achchhii kaavish hai magar jaisa k Gul-e-TasbeeH Ji ne farmaayaa aapko zaraa sii tavajjo denii chaahiye auzaan pe, bahr pe aur sinf-e-suKhan kii haiyat pe :) iA, palak jhapakte hii aap ek kaamiiyaab shaa'irah kahlaayeNgii iA :)