UDAAS SHAAM KI BATAIN.......

bheegiyaad · November 26, 2007, 6:34pm

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hamara tou aik hi nick hai aur yehi kafee hai

aap k kitnay hean

redidentity · November 27, 2007, 8:48am

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mujhe sirf ye kehna hai Azad se k ager aap ko tanqeed kerni hai to shoq se farmayen.. i will welcome it..

but the worst thing ab ur message was that k it was not tanqeed.. aap ne aisay andaaz main message likha jese main kisi ki poetry chori ker k likhta hoon..

mera nahi khayal k aapka comment kisi bhi tehreer k takhleeq kernay walay ko pleasing lagay ga.. aur mujhe bhi isi leay bura laga..

so please please please.. ilzaamaat na lagaya karin.. they are hurting and also frustrating plus annoying..

I hope k aap understand karain ge..

Thanks..

Regards.

Jhanjharewali · November 28, 2007, 12:21am

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wah ji Deadsoul kya baat hei! u write so well, subhanallah! thanx for sharing and for telling me about this adawise mei iss section mei kam aati huun.

Prince_Ali · November 28, 2007, 5:34am

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nice! something different :k:

arjay · November 28, 2007, 7:23pm

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TAZAA HAWA BAHAAR KI...DIL KA MALAAL LAYGAIEE,
PAYA-E-JUNOO SE HALQA-E-GARDISH-E-HAAL LAYGAIEE

Princess_OF_Hearts · November 29, 2007, 7:44am

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batao : ab juda hokar bhala kaisay jeogay tum
kaha : marna to hai ek din, so issi bahanay say
Amazing..simply Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!

arjay · November 29, 2007, 7:46am

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AIE ZAUQ...KICI HAMDAM-E-DEIREENA KA MILNA,
BEHTARR HAI MULAQAT...MASIHA 'O KHIZER SE !

K337 · December 1, 2007, 1:22am

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awesome

arjay · December 1, 2007, 7:15am

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ABB BHI USKO...MARAZ-E-WADA FARAMOUSHI HAI....
AUR HERR DUMM WOHI DAWA HAI...MASIHA'EE KA.........(Aali)

bheegiyaad · December 1, 2007, 1:41pm

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:k: gud 1

arjay · December 2, 2007, 9:29am

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AALI jinka funn-e-sukhan mein, Ikk andaz nirala thaah,
Naqd-e-Sukhan mein zikr ye aaya...DOHAY parhh ne wala thaah...

Jane kiyon logon ki nazarein...unn takk pauncheen hum ne tow....
CHAND NAGAR k INSHA saheb.....AALI jinka haala thaah....

deadsoul · December 4, 2007, 11:51am

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thx eveone

jawadjee · December 17, 2007, 10:05am

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kia baat ha sir jee
zabardast
kaha ho ap
wapis anaa hay kay nahe

deadsoul · December 24, 2007, 2:06pm

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thx