TUMHARA AUR MERA SATH BAQI HY...

S.786 · May 27, 2008, 6:34am

zameen k raaz jesy chand taron ko bataty hen…

hawa sargushiyan karti hay…,

meri aawaaz sunti hay…

tumhen fursat mily tu dekhna..

inhi sarkash si lehron men kahin ik dolti kashti …

** issi kashti men ik tanha musafir…**

musafir k labon pr wapsi k geet hen ab bhi

lehron ki soorat,dastaan kehty rehty hen..

,abhi kuch raat baqi hay,hamara saath baqi hay…

(s.naz)

_Masoom_Muskaan · May 27, 2008, 8:11pm

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moshkel words ke meanings beh batayn :ASA:

NikamiJano · May 28, 2008, 2:51am

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Beautiful nazam s… keep it up :k:

S.786 · May 28, 2008, 7:02am

M.M konsy mushkil words lagy hen janab???ham bhi pak sy door hen magar

urdu k tamam words samajhny ki koshish karty hen tu aap kio...........??:)

N.K........shukriy buhut

chacha_Ghalib · May 28, 2008, 10:56pm

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wah... hamesha ki tarha bohat achay khayalaat hain aur rawani bhi khoob hai

mujhe lag raha hai aap GS ki behtareen shaira banin gi

S.786 · May 29, 2008, 8:15am

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thank u ch ghalib.......aapka husn-e-nazar hy...men nacheez kis qabil hon.......?

Aryaan · May 29, 2008, 8:55pm

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Bohat hi acha likha hai Safia Naz..:)

redidentity · May 30, 2008, 5:30am

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beautiful poem.. :k:

muddii · May 30, 2008, 6:50am

Very nice:)

abeeha · May 30, 2008, 9:12am

bht achi poem hy:)

S.786 · May 30, 2008, 6:22pm

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thanks.......nawaazish