Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

redidentity · May 9, 2008, 6:51am

Aik Nazm Jo Shayad Pehlay Bhi Share Ho Chuki Hogi,

Muhabbat Hum Bhi Ker Lain Ge
Ye Ghalti Tum Bhi Ker Lena

Chalo Tum He Se Ker Lain Ge
Kisi Se Tum Bhi Ker Lena

Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain
To Phir Ik Mashwara Dain Ge

Muhabbat Tum Ne Kerni Hai
Suno! Hum He Se Ker Lena

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

cricketplaya · May 9, 2008, 7:21am

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

:biggthumb

abeeha · May 9, 2008, 8:09am

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

very lovely,rhythmic and cute short poem.
now i have found new words.......:)

Precious_Khan · May 9, 2008, 12:59pm

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

Itna risky Kaam :nono:

Buhat Aala Sharing :~)

NikamiJano · May 9, 2008, 1:13pm

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain
To Phir Ik Mashwara Dain Ge

Muhabbat Tum Ne Kerni Hai
Suno! Hum He Se Ker Lena

baRa mushkil kaam hia red

Beautiful sharing

Shumaisa · May 9, 2008, 2:08pm

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

lol.. Very Nice :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · May 9, 2008, 11:06pm

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thats lovely :D

redidentity · May 10, 2008, 6:36am

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hansnay ki kia baat hai?

thanks abeeha

risky kaam :halo:

wese thanx

mushkil kaam q keh rahay hain log

thanks hansi q ?

thanks shab jee

mama_ki_dua · May 10, 2008, 11:10pm

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

very nice :)

alimani786 · May 11, 2008, 12:20pm

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very. NICE

NikamiJano · May 11, 2008, 5:15pm

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mushkil kaha hia red namumkiN tu nahi :p

redidentity · May 12, 2008, 7:08am

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thanks mama ki dua and alimani

nakhan · May 12, 2008, 7:13am

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Zabardast...
**
Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain
To Phir Ik Mashwara Dain Ge

Muhabbat Tum Ne Kerni Hai
Suno! Hum He Se Ker Lena**

redidentity · May 12, 2008, 1:26pm

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

thanks nakhan jee :)

Aryaan · May 12, 2008, 3:19pm

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Good One Ahmer..:k:

S.786 · May 12, 2008, 8:29pm

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good........but 2baara.......ghlati....?

Sajalina · May 13, 2008, 5:02am

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

That's a beautiful little piece.... to the point baat. :D

redidentity · May 13, 2008, 5:34am

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thanks Aryaan

pehle kab ki thee ghalati?

thanks Sajal

ahsan.javaid · May 13, 2008, 6:19am

Re: Tumhain Hum Dost Kehtay Hain..

Nice Very good

redidentity · May 13, 2008, 12:54pm

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thanks ahsan.. :$