Tumhain dil sy bhulanay ki ....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Tumhain dil sy bhulanay ki …

Shaa’ori koshishen kar kay…!!!

Tumhain na yaaad karnay ki …!!!

Zaroori koshishen kar kay…!!!

Main khud hi thak gaya hoon ab…

Adhori koshishen kar kay…!!!

**

Aatif Saeed

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Re: Tumhain dil sy bhulanay ki …

Koshish he kyon krni hai:emmy:

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Btw enter10 ur purana avatar was better.

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Re: Tumhain dil sy bhulanay ki ....

Mujhy to wo bhi pasand nhi tha na hi ye hy.....URL ka option block hy.......Pata nhi kab allow kryn gay.....Na hi Upload ka option hy......

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Jub you hv 1500 posts tub allow karainge.

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1000 posts par :cobra:

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qulfiyan khaein sab kuch bhool jaein :P

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rules change ho gaye kya:5:

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Nice :k:

Shair ko zara apni shairi bhi sudharne ki koshish karni chahiye (j/k)