Around a year ago, I posted a poem titled **Daawat-e-Tamaasha **. The daawat started with three items on its ‘menu’ but has since grown to 12 items and I guess the menu will continue to expand :~) Today I am sharing with you another item which is perhaps No.8 or 9. Anyway, have a look at it :~)
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Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Thats Really Nice
Thanks For sharing
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
As usual excellent stuff Amal :k:
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
i don’t know why your nazam reminded me of this nazam ..
agar tumhare naye rah kay
kese mor per
tumehin koe aisa bay-asra insaaan milay
jo rah pay kahra
kese sehra k shajar k trha
kare dohp mein tap raha ho
jiskay anso pohnchnay wala koi na ho
jiske baaton ko koi yaqeen na kar raha ho
jo ro ro kar insaaf ke behk maang raha ho
jo sub kuch haar k kese k intazar kar raha ho
jo mohabbat k do lafzon k liye tars raha ho
to
aik pal kahray ho kar
itna souchna k tum bilkul
aisay he aik zinda jism
ko marnay chor ayay ho.. !
khair your work again beautiful as usual ..* :k: .. *
Jiske tanhaye pay rafaqatoOn ke koi qaba bhi na ho
Jiskay paroo’n mein aur urnay ka hosla bhi na ho
Jo falak ke banhon mein chupe hoe hawa say daray
Jisay apnay sfar aur muqadar ka kuch pata bhi na ho
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
awesome… :k:
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Wah… Wonderful… 
Tnx Amal … 
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Wah Amal aap tou waqei buhat zabardast likhtay hain:-) by the way main nay sehmay huwey parinday ko dekha hay issliye hum iss dawat pe nahin aain gay,koi aur dawat bhejo :~p
Jinhain Urdu Parhni nahin atti :-d
Tum nay sehmay huwey parinday ko kabhi dekha hay
Apnay qaaflay say bichera huwa aik sehma parinda
Jis ki tanhaai pe rafaaqton ki koi qabaa bhi na ho
Jis kay paron mein aur uRnay ka hoslaa bhi na ho
Jo falak ki baahon mein chuhpi huwi hawa say daray
Jisay apnay safar aur muqadar ka kuch pata bhi na ho
Jo ajnabi raah kay kisi moR par tnhaa baethay
Apnay qabeelay kay palat anay kay khawaab buntaa ho
Har lamha barhti huwi taareeki kay sanaatay mein
Kisi shikaari kay qadmon ki chaap suntaa ho
Shauq-e-tamasha hay tou kisi roz mujhsay milnay aao
Tumnay sehmay huwey parinday ko nahin dekha agar!
Amal
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
behad khoobsorat tehreer he Amal ji :k:, eik eik line itni khobsorti say likhi gayi he keh lafz khud boltey hain… is Daawat-e-Tamaasha](http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=86373) ka 3rd our yeh wala part muje sab say achha laga he.. baqi kab parhney ko mil rahi he?
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Wah Wah!!!!
Jiske tanhaye pay rafaqatoOn ke koi qaba bhi na ho
Jiskay paroo’n mein aur urnay ka hosla bhi na ho
Jo falak ke banhon mein chupe hoe hawa say daray
Jisay apnay sfar aur muqadar ka kuch pata bhi na ho
Yaar Amal, I got lil confused by using the term menus and items. Khair baaqqiii items kidher heinnn???? I would really love to read them. Aur yaar aik baat aur, did you do the background urself?
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Jo falak ki baaNhoN meiN chupi hui hawa sey darrey
Jissey apney safar aur muqaddar ka kuch pata bhi na ho
Bey-hadd khoobsurat ghazal hai Amal…
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Rameesha ji aek, aek kar ke sab post kar dooN ga, thora sa time lagey ga :-)
...main nay sehmay huwey parinday ko dekha hay issliye hum iss dawat pe nahin aain gay,koi aur dawat bhejo :~p
Chalye achi baat hey, aek guest ka khaana bach jaey ga :-)
Yaar Amal, I got lil confused by using the term menus and items. Khair baaqqiii items kidher heinnn???? I would really love to read them. Aur yaar aik baat aur, did you do the background urself?
Chodhry sahab agar aap pehley post ki hui poem deikheiN to us mein 3 alag, alag situations theeN...1) Tootey huwey pattey, 2) tthrey huwey paani, 3) uljhey huwey dhaagey, to daawat ko jo menu tha na us meiN ye teen items hui na, aur ab ye chotthi, 4) sehma huwa parinda. Baat aai samajh meiN? By the way, thanx for liking it :)
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Superb!
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Achi Rubaai hai dost
I like the way you expressed the feelings.....
Har ik parinda jo bhatka hua mila mujhko
mujhey laga ke nayee rehguzar nikale ga
jo sookhi shaak pe betha udaas rehta hai
khazaan ko humsafar tanhaai ka bana le ga.......
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
thnx ** Amal ** sahab for sharing this beautiful Poem.
thnx ** Gul ** g for Roman Version.
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Arey bhai deikho ye kon aaya :~) Hmaari maasoom si behna :~) Lekin Masoom Muskaan aap itney kharab mood meiN kiuN? :(
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Apna andaaz to khraab nahi tum jo samjhey wohi jawaab nahi
hum ne tareef ki thi kaatib ki saaf likha hai kuch hijaab nahi......
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
buhat khoob 
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
nice one Aymal lakin laga hia me bohat late aik tu udher phir b nazar par jati hia idher na ana hota hia na he pata chalta hia k kon kia likh raha is rastey ki abhi adat nahi na:(
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
**
Nafees shakhs tha, zaoq-e-jamaal rakhta tha
apney hunar meiN khaasa kamaal rakhta tha
aam-feham nahi tha magar andaaz-e-bayaaN
wo har jawaab meiN ik naya sawaal rakhta tha
**
