Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
SaaNs leney ki aadat ke elaawa har aadat khud sey daalni parrti hey. Kuch simtoN ki jaanib gaahe-ba-gaahey safar na kia jaaey to rastey bhool hi jaatey heiN.
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
hmmm let’s see kia hota bholtey ya phir 
aur wesay b aik Q hai ap se adat dali kis ne 
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
nice poem :)
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Ager tareef kar te ho to hum qabil nahi aai dost
wo he hum keh rahey the jo samajh ne hum ko samjha ya
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Jis kay paron mein aur uRnay ka hoslaa bhi na ho
Jo falak ki baahon mein chuhpi huwi hawa say daray
Jisay apnay safar aur muqadar ka kuch pata bhi na ho
Amal -- Its very beautiful.:)
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
it’s beautiful :k::k:
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hummm maza nahi aya
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Bohat khoob... Khush rahoo yaar
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Zabardast. Nice to see you here Amal.
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Amal aap ne nazam to acchi likhi hae...
but I think I've read the better ones by you.
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Something very very different from what I have been made used to. I am not sorry for it didn’t impress you, but am definitely happy that at last you spoke :~)
Now this is the most polite way to paraphrase what Azad just said. But am thankful for the frank comments by both of you. By the way, it’s nice to see you after a long long time 
Re: Tum ney sehmey huwey parindey ko kabhi deikha hey!
Thanks Amal…it’s been a while but it was real nice to see few people I know.