Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ajnabi_ladki July 23, 2007, 3:17am 1

***Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do
Is dil se kya kahun ise kaise samjaun
Is ke totne ki awaz to na ayegi tumhe
Par uske tukroon ko le kar mai kahan jaoon

Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do
Un yaadon ka mai kya karun
Tumhare likhe khaton ko main kahan jalaun
Kisey baar baar sataoon kisey manaoon

Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do
Meri siskiyon mein bhi tumhara hi naam hai
In ashkon ko mai kahan chhupaun
Tum shumaar ho abhi tak pardanasheeno mein
Log sabab puchenge to bolo mai kya bataun

Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do
Tujhe bhulaane ke kaunse tareeke apnaoon
Meri dhadkan, har saans ki rawangi ho tum
Tujhe bhoolane ki koshish mein kahin mar na jaoon***

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being_lonely July 23, 2007, 3:38am 2

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do
Tujhe bhulaane ke kaunse tareeke apnaoon
Meri dhadkan, har saans ki rawangi ho tum
Tujhe bhoolane ki koshish mein kahin mar na jaoon

So Sad Nice Sharing Aj Larki :k:

ajnabi_ladki July 23, 2007, 3:41am 3

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

arey yeh meine rulane ke liye toh nahi post ki thi lolz.

being_lonely July 23, 2007, 3:43am 4

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Aansuon Se Daman Aksar Paak Ho Jaatay Hain !

ajnabi_ladki July 23, 2007, 3:47am 5

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

sahi kaha..
khair appko pasand ayi shukriya :)

Sheal July 23, 2007, 3:48am 6

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

very nice ajnabi larki. thanks for sharing.

IS July 23, 2007, 3:48am 7

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

nice sharing a_l

ajnabi_ladki July 23, 2007, 3:49am 8

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

thx guys :D

tahreem_saeed July 23, 2007, 6:49am 9

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superb nice choice AL

Prince_Ali July 23, 2007, 3:16pm 10

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

wah! zabardast… :k:

rkopra July 23, 2007, 3:24pm 11

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

you're leaving me.
please tell me
a simple thing -
how do I console my heart?
you'll not hear the
breaking noise of my heart,
but tell me,
where do I go
with the broken
pieces of my heart?

Saqi_the_angel July 23, 2007, 4:40pm 12

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

AL Bhaut hee Khoobsurat, Don't know wot to say. I am lost for words.

Thanks for sharing

ajnabi_ladki July 23, 2007, 5:22pm 13

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

thx everyone :)

Amal July 24, 2007, 2:17pm 14

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Lovely stuff :k:

aikajnabi July 24, 2007, 4:42pm 15

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Wow...once again great selection....agar aap nay khud likhi hai tu bhoot dard hai lafzoo main agar choose kya hai tu bhoot deep thoughts hai...thanks for sharing with us.

ajnabi_ladki July 24, 2007, 6:31pm 16

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

thanks :)
nahi meine khud nahi likhi.

SJ July 25, 2007, 7:33am 17

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

Its Nice.................
:)

babri July 25, 2007, 9:17am 18

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

wah!!!!!!!!!!bohat khoob.

ajnabi_ladki July 25, 2007, 5:43pm 19

Re: Tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do

thanks :)