Humaray aisay naseeb kahan :(
Aik dammm fit…super:k:
keep it up ghazlooo:flower1: waiting for another one:D
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tum nay tamasha banaya mera zamanay k samnay, isay arsa beet gayay
woh manzar aaj bhi hai mere aankhon mein dafan jesay kal ke baat ho
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Ghazaloo … this one to bauhat hi zabardast … 
thankooooooooo sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh
awww next one pata nahi kab ayay gee per haan abhi mein chemistry k kuch likh kar behj sakte hoo:D
once again thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Azad hein kion apko waqaee andaa ubalna nahi ataeekzzzz
Ps: no sad faces:-)
seekh jain gay aisi jaldi bhi kia hay
tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
per her sham tujhe yad kar k dil rota hai istrha jesay kal k baat ho
Seshay ke trha pal mein bekhr gayay meray khwab, isay arsa beet gaya
per chubhti hain sheeshey k kerchian aj bhi aisay jesay kal ke baat ho
Logon ke zuba'n pay ayay mere dastan-e-ishq ko to arsa beet gaya
per logo ke zuba'n per hai yeh dastaan aaj bhi aisay jesay kal ke baat ho
tum nay tamasha banaya mera zamanay k samnay, isay arsa beet gaya
woh manzar hai meri ankhon mein dafan aj bhi aisay jaisay kal ki baat ho
teray baeis jo zamanay nay zakum diay thay, isay arsa beet gaya
per her zakhum aaj bhi hara hai aisay jesay kal ke baat ho
mainay copy kiya that ka jo shahar acha hoo ga us par comments doon ga magar dubara barhnay kay baad asaa laga ka sub be bohat acha hai kiya baat hai waqai Arsa hoo giya
thanx a lot dilsay for ur commentzzzzz:flower1:
meanz a lot to me:hug:
Azad yeh bhi sahe kaha ap na:halo:
wah ji very nice :k: keep it up 
thanx a lot chandaaaaaaa:hug:
inshAllah i’ll keep up:hug:
bohat game utha di hai aap ne partner :k: bohat khub!
good one :k:
eekzzzzz 
ap na tareef k bare baat hai:p
waise thanx a bunch for ur commentz:hug:
meanz a lot:-)
Rising Tempest thanx a lot:D
Me like me like!
r u trying to say that u liked it:-| 
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:flower1:
Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
mashAllah ghazal bhut achii likhi ha tum nay
i really like these two :k: likhna shayd asaan ha likan apni feelings aur emotions ko khoubsourt alfaz me bayan karna har ak ki bas ki baat nahi aur mahsAllah tum likh sakti 
aur wohi jo sab nay kaha k waqt k sath tumarai poetry mein aur maturity aye gi aur nikhar jye gi
keep it up:k:
Re: Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
Awww appi thanx a lottttt:hug:
i was waiting for ur reply:flower1:
inshAllah likhte raho gee and once again thanx:hug:
GKK bohat achi hey :k:
keep it up n keep sharing.
thanx a lotttt
inshAllah i’ll keep sharing:)
Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
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tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
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wah, i didnt kno you could write itni khoobsoorti se.well done
Re: Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
Thanx a lot appi for the pm and for the reply:flower1: meanz a lot to me:~)
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