feel free to say anything… cause really need ur comments:flower1:
wah ji wah bhut achay:k:
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keep it up
very welldone gazal :k: :k:
keep it up 
zabardasttttttt ghazli yara… absolutely wubbed it…
cant pick o8 one bit that i like more than the nxt… its all equally gr8… :k: …
keep it up shweety… 
mashaAllah u write real well… …
Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
Alright, here we go with my honest comments.
It’s a very nice poem, very good job :k: I am not a poet neither do i write poetry, but I still think you can improve this a little bit. Here are my 2 cents.
Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
Ghazal… you are very talented…very close observation, very matured and fantastic word collection… in this age you are at so high…aagay Allah jaanay heheh mashAllah…keep it up, no doubt one day you will be one of best poets…inshAllah…your collection is awasome really :k:
wow, I don’t read much of urdu poetries, but i gotta say that you did a very good job on this :k: its intresting to see ur point of view, but i think u can elobrate more on it. good work kiddo
Seshay ke trha pal mein bekhr gayay meray khwab, isay arsa beet gaya
per chuhbtay hai Seshay k kerchian aj bhi aisay jesay kal ke baat ho
Zabardast hai… :k: keep it up…
Saani tera laa nahi sakti ye dunya, dhondh le
neel k saaghr se lekar taabkhaak-e-kaashghar
wah GKK:flower1:
good job:k:
keep it up:flower1:
zabardast chandaaaaaaaa:eek:
wowwwwwoow
keep it up yar:k:
kafi deep ho tum:)wesey:)
nice one
good job
zabardast :k::k:
ghazal jaanu, tum ney bohat hi acha likha hai
keep it up
Re: tujhe say bechar k tanha zindage guzartay hoay to mujhe arsa beet gaya
I am amazed at your maturity. Never knew you can write so beautifully. Though the tone is sad in this ghazal but its very well written. Keep writing. You have the potential to express yourself :k:
Thanks for PM and Happy eid
good effort ghazal keep it up :k:
Mashallah bohut achi koshish hay … :k:
rani, koyal appi, MSL and GKQ thanx a lot for encouraging me
and thanx to everyone will reply in detials later:flower1:
ok here i go:-D
felt really good to see that some members really spent their time on pointing out sum mistakes and gave me suggestions:flower1:
Jaan lewaa, cuteepie, Pakistani kurhi, chotuuuu, Vivo and Azad thanx a lot everyone… u really encouraged me by replying here and yeah i’ll keep writing:flower1:
aymoooo oyayay tumhare reply ka bohut bohut sukria… bohut acha laga k tum na apna chota say demakh use 
kar k mere ghazal ko pasand kia:hug: just love u and ur comments:kiss:
bus duaa hai k tum nazar na laga do:snooty: j.k 
Sohail jee first of thanx a bunch for spending time on my ghazal:flower1:
aur ap na jo bhi edit kia tha woh aik dam perfect and it mekes more sense than mine…
thanx for ur two cents means a lot to me:p
ata bahiiawwww ata bahii thanx a lot for ur words… means so much to me:hug:
lolzzz jee nahi itne bhi nahi talented hoo yeh bus apke nazar ke baat hai:flower1:
apke encouragement agar meray sath rahe ho INSHALLAH mein bohut dorr jaoo gee:hug:
pagaldeewani api thanx a lot for ur words:-)
and INSHALLAH mein improve karo gee:hug:
AsSweetAs thanx yaara:hug:
Waoo sher zaber10 hai:k:
tumharay sher ka jawab kis trha doo i don’t know per here is sumthing u might enjoy it:)
Moti to nahiN thai koi palkooN sai chunta
Haam ankh sai tapkai huai ansoo thai
rabikaa oh Waoo ap ka tareef karnay k bohut shukria:hug:
aur about the deep thing pata nahi bus acha pahrna aur likhna mujhe pasnad hai:-)
Cap oh ho itna kuch:blush:
thanx yaara:flower1: meray sub dosto k alfaaz meray liye bohut meaning rakhtay hain:-)
and yeah Eid mubare to u too:flower1:
teray baeis jo zamanay nay zakum diay thay, isay arsa beet gaya
per her zakhum aaj bhi hara hai aisay jesay kal ke baat ho
Nice! :k:
Achi koshish aur kawish hai, aur kaho kehti raho. Thanks…
Itni achi ghazal kabse nahee sunee, isay arsa beet gaya
Auro kay shair mai woh baat kaha jo ghazal kisi ke baat ho