wel friendz…ye poem intekhaab mein maree first post thee…uss waqt mujhay pata nahin tha k apni zaatee poetry yahan Shora-e-gupshupmein share karni hai…
aj app logon k sath dobara share kar rahee hon…
TragedY
Tumharay Baad Say Mein Nay Jaan’an
Zabt Ka Bandhan Toor Diya Hai
Buss Yun he…
Buss Yun he Hasna Choor Diya Hai
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Sonia, the poem is so beautiful.. very simple n precise.. covering all the feelings of a tragic scenario.. magar dear kia hua hai.. mujhay batao k itni udaasi ko kion galay lagaya hua hai???
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aww sweet Bro ye bohat pehlay likhee thee mein nay…
koi 3 saal pehlay …han tab thoreee see udaas thee…
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aww sweet Bro ye bohat pehlay likhee thee mein nay............. koi 3 saal pehlay ..............han tab thoreee see udaas thee..............:)
abb to udaas nahi hona??
batao?
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nahin nahin hansna nahin chorna hansna hi to zindagi hai 
PS to aap bhi shaira hain very cool :k:
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wel mein nay hasna nahin choraa…
waisay he poem mein jhoot likh diya tha:fatee:
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jhoot bolna buhat buri baat hai 
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Sab he boltay hain…mein nay bol diya tou kya hoa:@:
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sab ke bolnay se buri baat achi nahin ho jati pagli 
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hmm…
kah tou app theek rahay ho magar kya karain…jin par trust karo wo bhi jhoot bol kar torture karaty hain…so ab mein nay bhi soocha ab jhoot he bol kar khush ho jaya karon ge:)
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jhooti khushi dair pa nahin hoti
*Ali_*
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chalo kuch dair ki rahat tou mil he jatee hai na…Dair pa kuch bhi nahin zamanay mein…
SJ
No Smoking Plz…
mujhay bohat uljhan hay iss k dhuain say:snooty:
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han me nay parhi thi
nice one sonia
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nice
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nice
thanks dreamgal:)
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nice one sonia :)
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buhat piyaree hai.................keep sharing sonia jee........buhat acha likhteee hain app.........
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It Is cute sonia :)
