tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay

Koyal · February 13, 2004, 2:14am

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tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee’ay
teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee’ay

sehaN chamaN maiN aj ajeeb waa’qeya huwa
shabnum ki aik boond ne gunchay jala dee’ay

punchi udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
sayaad ne qafas se prinday uraa dee’ay

baydaar tu zaror huwey they shaa’or-o-fikaR
dil ne magaR thapak k dobaRa sulaa dee’ay

is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee’ay***

cuteepie · February 13, 2004, 4:07am

wah :k:

AQ · February 13, 2004, 4:33am

wow.. that was beautiful

.. especially these two:

tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee'ay

is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee'ay

Azad · February 13, 2004, 5:18am

Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay

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Shikar nicks ke zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
Chiknay ne saray raaz Bholay ko bata dee'ay

GS Cafe' maiN aj ajeeb waa'qeya huwa
Azad~ ki aik Post ne kalay'jay jala dee'ay

Capri udaas dekh k kuch soochnay k baad
Mod ne Haa'ton ke sub to'tay urraa dee'ay

baydaar tu zaror huwey they Hum chat par
US ne magaR Block pe dobaRa sulaa dee'ay

is ne be meRi msg ko reply kia na phir kabhi
maiN ne be sab puranay nicks mett'haa dee'ay***

Adab Arz

:D

Shab-e-Hijar · February 13, 2004, 5:47am

very nice :k:

Capricorn · February 13, 2004, 8:44am

Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee’ay

Loved this line :k:

Daagh · February 13, 2004, 10:42am

Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee’ay

bahot khoob koyal jee

but kaash aise sayaad haqeeqat mein hote

Jaan_Lewaa · February 13, 2004, 6:42pm

bhut achay:k:

Amarbail · February 13, 2004, 6:46pm

Wow … its superb …:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 14, 2004, 3:55am

two thumbz up:flower1:

thanx for sharing:hug:

Swera · February 14, 2004, 1:04pm

:k:

Koyal · February 14, 2004, 10:36pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
wow.. that was beautiful

.. especially these two:

tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee'ay
teetli ne saray raaz gulooN ko bata dee'ay

is ne be meRi jo simat dekha na phir kabhi
maiN be sab chiRaag jala k bhuja dee'ay
[/QUOTE]

bari mushkil se hota hia chamaN maiN deeda war paida..:)

Koyal · February 14, 2004, 10:38pm

thanks..

Koyal · February 15, 2004, 1:19am

Re: Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee’ay

WiseGuy · February 15, 2004, 5:24am

Bohat khoob :k:

WiseGuy · February 15, 2004, 5:25am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

bari mushkil se hota hia chamaN maiN deeda war paida..:)
[/QUOTE]

Mubarak ho kab hua :D

Azad · February 15, 2004, 6:54pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Mubarak ho kab hua :D
[/QUOTE]

:rotfl"

Koyal · February 16, 2004, 9:09pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

:rotfl"
[/QUOTE]

ap ko be hansi ati hai wo be roftl k roop main aa aaa Amazing...:D

Koyal · February 17, 2004, 2:28am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Mubarak ho kab hua :D
[/QUOTE]

sooch lain Wg abhi bata day kia k KAB huwa ;)

Koyal · February 17, 2004, 2:33am

Re: Re: tootey paRooN k zakham be un ko dekha dee’ay

thanks sallu g haan ye tu hia