Umeed hai ke aap log ziyada naraz nahi hooN gaiy Weekend busy tha, to iss waja se mein naee thread nahi khol saki. Aik dafa phir ma’azrat chahti hoon
Rules of Bait Bazi:
Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
We should follow urdu alphabets.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
Zard patoon ki tarhan khwaub uray phirtay theey
phir bhi kuch rang meray deeda e naam naak main theey
shehar e be-rang!teray logh gawahae deingey
hum say khush rang bhi teray khaas o khaashaak main theey!
woh mujh say poch raha tha batao kaisa laga
tum agalay zakhumoon ko choro ye ghao kaisa laga
ajaab sawal kia andhiyoon nay patoon say
shujar say tuth kay girna batao kaisa laga!
Weekend busy tha, to iss waja se mein naee thread nahi khol saki. Aik dafa phir ma’azrat chahti hoon 