"tadees-e-talab"...merii ek nazam

Amal · February 8, 2011, 3:11pm

Re: “tadees-e-talab”…merii ek nazam

Mujhey nazm hamesha sey is leeye ziaada pasand rahi hey ke ye gheir’zaroori funni masloN meiN uljhey bina, likhney waaley ko apney jazbaat aur ehsaasaat khul kar bayaan karney deti hey. Aap yaqeenan itni hi aasaani sey ghazal bhi keh letey hoN ge, lekin shaed dil sey aap ye bhi tasleem kareiN ke nazm kehna ghazal kehney sey be’had aasaan hey. Rahi baat maqbooliat ki, to us ki gawaahi to aap khud hi dey chukey heiN

No Need for a Warrant, You’re an Immigrant

taqdees-e-talab

maiN jaantaa huuN tumhaarii nigaah kaa mafhoom
mirii Hayaat kaa partav hai jiskii jumbiish meN
mire sha’oor kii dai’reena aarzoo kaa gudaaz
hazaaroN saal se maKhfii hai jiskii larzish meN

sukoot-e-shab meN fazaaoN kii naGhmagii, tum ho!
dayaar-e-dil kee bahaaroN kee taazagee tum ho!
kalee kaa Husn, guloN kee shiguftagee tum ho!
Khumaar_baar nazaaroN kii dil_kashii, tum ho!
miree Hayaat-e-HazeeN sar-basar tumhaaree hai!
tumhaare dam se hee jalte haiN chaahatoN ke chiraaGh!

maiN jaantaa huuN tumhaarii Hasiin palkoN par
** chhalak rahe haiN phir aaNsoo miri moHabbat meN**
** samajh sako jo miree mushkileN to behtar hai**
** maiN zindagii ke kisii moR par magar ik baar**
** tumhare paas ba_har taur lauT aauuNgaa**
** tumhaare Husn kii ra’naaiyoN meN gum ho kar**
** maiN apnii rooH kii taskeen phir se kar luuNgaa**
** magar, yeh raaz tum pe 'ayaaN ho to behtar hai**
** tumhaarii aaNkh kaa motii hai waqt_saaz abhii**
** Tapak na jaaye kahiiN iztiraab-e-jaaN ho kar**
** mire Khuloos_o_moHabbat kaa vaasta tumko**
** jo ho sake to miraa intezaar kar lenaa!**

** maiN jaantaa huuN tumhaarii nigaah kaa mafhoom**

Aek likhaari ke tor par aap ye feisla kar saktey heiN ke aap ke nazm doobara na nilkheiN, lekin aey qaari ke tor par meiN samajhta hooN ke ye feisla aap ki apni zaat ke saath aek barri na’insaafi ho gi.

Aek likhaari ke tor par aap ye daawa kar saktey heiN ke aap ghazal kehney meiN mahaarat rakhtey heiN, lekin aek qaari ke tor par mujhey ye arz karney ki ijaazat dijeeye ke meiN ney aaj tak aap ki koi ghazal is qadar khoobsoorat aur bharpoor nahi paai, jitni ke ye nazm hey.