taaweel-e-ba'eed

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Re: taaweel-e-ba’eed

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manay yeh nazam nahi perhe bus last one wala suna tha

app nay koi jora idher ka udher …i m confuse now

haan, idhar ka oodhr jor ke naya shair bana liya. Aaj kal ke dor main kitna sach hai mera shair, right ?