Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

[deadsoul]

Suno jo pochti ho tum
Kaha shayir huwa wo gum
kio tark kia likhna
kuch apni wafaon pay
koi misraa, koi naghmaa
meri chanchal adaaon pay
Tumhain kaisay bataon main
Tumhi ho shayeri meri
tumhi matlaa, tumhi maqtaa
tumhi deewangi meri
Tumhin nay to sikhaya hai
Zakhmon ko chupa laina
Hazaron rog ho phir bhi
Bazahir muskura laina
Meri raat ka ujala
Meray geet ki ragni
kari dhoop k safar main
jaisay thandi chandni
Meri zeest ka ho hasil
Meri dharkanon main shamil
Meri ghazal, mera deewaan ho tum
Meri zindagi ka unwaan ho tum
Bina mangay jo hoi pori
Wohi mannat ho tum meri
Teri ek hansi k wastay
Meri saans bhi nisaar hai
Tujhay neer bahata dekh kar
Lagay zindagi bekaar hai
Kaisay bhala is shayer say
Kuch likhnay ka samaan hoho

MERAY SAMNAY MERAY SAATH MAIN
MERI ZEEST HUM KALAAM HO…

[redidentity]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

Very Nice..

[bheegiyaad]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

zabardast:)

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

@redidentity

Very Nice..

thx red

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

zabardast:)

thx bheegiyaad

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

kya baat hae aapki Deadsoul.....its very sweet :)

[Amal]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum…

@deadsoul

Tumhain kaisay bataon main
Tumhi ho shayeri meri
tumhi matlaa, tumhi maqtaa
tumhi deewangi meri
…
Meri zeest ka ho hasil
Meri dharkanon main shamil
Meri ghazal, mera deewaan ho tum
Meri zindagi ka unwaan ho tum
Bina mangay jo hoi pori
Wohi mannat ho tum meri

MERAY SAMNAY MERAY SAATH MAIN
MERI ZEEST HUM KALAAM HO…

Kya baat hey deadsoul sahab :k: maza aa gaya. Bohat shaandaar nazm likhi hey. Jitni bhi taareef ki jaey, kam hey. Keep writing and keep shairng with us

[fizatiq]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

buhat khoob....

[SJ]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

Bohat Khoob!
Parhnay ka maza aa gaya......................
App Shair hain..............tu Dewaan kab Shayaa ho ga app ka?:)

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

@Jhanjharewali

kya baat hae aapki Deadsoul.....its very sweet :)

thx chunchun wali:D

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum…

@Amal

Kya baat hey deadsoul sahab :k: maza aa gaya. Bohat shaandaar nazm likhi hey. Jitni bhi taareef ki jaey, kam hey. Keep writing and keep shairng with us

thx amal
itnay achay lafaaz me apriciat karnay ka

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

@fizatiq

buhat khoob....

thx

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

@soniaa_jee

Bohat Khoob! Parhnay ka maza aa gaya...................... App Shair hain..............tu Dewaan kab Shayaa ho ga app ka?:)

buhat buhat shukriya sonia
but deewan agar agya to sari copies apko he kharidni parengi:D

[NikamiJano]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

v nice desoul keep writing agar ap waqie khud likh rehi :p

[Dushwari]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

deadsoul,
you are actually alive.
nice poem.
good thoughts.
thanks for sharing.
dushwari

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

v nice desoul keep writing agar ap waqie khud likh rehi :p

thx nikamijano
ji han yeh me nay he likhi hai

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

deadsoul, you are actually alive. nice poem. good thoughts. thanks for sharing. dushwari

thx dushwari

[ashi2007]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

itna sab aap se kisne pocha

ps bohat achey

[deadsoul]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum........

itna sab aap se kisne pocha

ps bohat achey

ashi ap yeh bhi bhool gayin k kis nay pocha

kher
thx

[goodnews]

Re: Suno Jo Pochti Ho Tum…

Khub:k: