Sho’alla say jal utthay hain … hummm Ghalban tail ka konwaN bhi apna hay. 
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*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *
Housla kitna hai, mien hoo.n janta
per ab kiya karoo.n Dil Nahi Manta :)
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dil ko koi golli sholli kerayein, kioon nahien maan rha yah.
kaash hotta 
improve Meanin?
Allah behter karay ga
I don’t know why it’s blue…but these days it’s really blue!
Thanks for the putting that smile on my face!
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
Hajumulah use kerien :p
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no really I fink compare to my poetry urs is way romantic, but on the other hand there is still some poems that if I write them here, they'll proly be creating the corner room again :D
essi umeed pey jiye jaa rhey hein
improve means exactly wahi ju aap ko samjh aya hay 
u r welcome jee
PS: n have it there achaa 
otherwise 
thank you, thank you , per abhi tu mein ney bhi kuch sanbhali hoi hein 
zarra puraani hein but 
aur yeh cornor room kia cheez hey???
ok I didn’t realize I was supposed to give my feedback here ..I PMed him back 
about the poem turned song -that was way too much info yaar
chodhry there was a corner room to discuss all the private topics, it was erased awhile back from the planet gs :D, chodhry guy sometimes u just have to control those feelings even if u have pour it down on the white sheet, they still can’t be shared wif everyone beside whoever read that poem of mine, they just gave me a look, and said who were u thinking about when u wrote this
tu kia khyaal hey phir
You are just makin me more curious abt tht cornor room sounds all the meaty and juicy stuff was there 
n btw tell me who were u thinking abt
PS: Can u pm tht poem to me, aik aur tension daal de hey aap ney
Chohdry bhai, great job yaar, laikin zara haath hola rakhna..... ;)
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*Originally posted by Black Mamba: *
Chohdry bhai, great job yaar, laikin zara haath hola rakhna..... ;)
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Thank you mamba bhai :) btw rythem tu improve kia na mein ney ;)
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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
dil ko koi golli sholli kerayein, kioon nahien maan rha yah.
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aisa hi kuch karna pare ga :)
damn good
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Just DO It
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*Originally posted by BaDsHaH ho Mein: *
damn good
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Badsha Salamt Jaan ki Aman payey bagair araz ker diya thaa, aaap ki appreciation sey tassalli ho gye hey key sab khair hey :D
zaberdasat :)