Stretching the very last moment…

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
Thanks for the pm.But umm this is kind of different from your other poems.Wase nice.:)

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lots of changes are going on over here ;)

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*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *

Goodness its expressive.
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kuch hova kia :p

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*Originally posted by Lajawab: *
Got your PM...But it's so romantic, now I want to go out and get a girlfriend...:D
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Best of Luck bro :D

I wish you may not get a pimple for a dimple ;)

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:blush:

I am flattered CM, literally, ppl around me might have seen this color on my face :blush:

nahien, not really, though Ialways wished for :bummer: Well now I gonna give it a shot, will try to write one or modify this one to a song :slight_smile:

Thanks for the encouragment :flower1:

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:blush:

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thank you Anwaar bhai :slight_smile: Dua hey Allah aap key haath jaldi peeley ker dey Aameen! :smiley:

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meri apni lassi hey aaap ko koi itraaz hey mein ess sey wine ka mazza loon ya orange juice ka :hoomh:

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oyieee swera kia hova hay, why u feeling blue???

achee nahien laggi kia :bummer:

Dont feel sad
Dont feel blue
this poem stands nothing
to the feelings I have for you

So turn it red
get the worries out ur head
I will be with you ever
Lets go to ***

j/k

oyieeeee i hope u wont mind. just trying to put a smile on ur face. :bummer: it looks so cute on you :blush:

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baad mien chahye jinni bhi maar per jay ekhair hey :smiley:

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:nono4: mera bhi yahi khyaal hay :bummer:

PS: baaqi sab tu theek hey na :smiley:

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:nono1: Anwaar bhai ki terhah Aameen boltey hein aap ho key hansti jaa rhi hoo

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yuaar tangie bhi maar rhey ho, angootha bhi dikha rhey hoo tarif bhi ker rhey hoo :hehe:

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tu why dont u improve ur taste :wink:

n thak you for the well wishes, kabhi tu hammari bhi sunni jaye gi na :bummer:

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:eek: :eek: ohhh haan sach aap ki tu shaaddi hoi hoi hey :hehe:

lagta hay aaj bhabhi ki khair nahien :wink:

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Hajumulah use kerien :stuck_out_tongue:

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:rotfl: Good one

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I have edited the poem, now its more like a song :slight_smile:

My very First Song :blush:

let me know what do you think. n who is going to sing it :wink: whoes gonna compose the music? :smiley:

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:bummer: ess terhah loot poot kioon ho rhein hein aap ???

thanks for the appreciation. :flower1:

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kaafi ummmm* i dunno .. kaafi ‘free-world’ say ta’alluq rakhtaa hay… baqol diya bajjo:D tauba tauba:p

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shaaddi shuda world sey bhi taluq rakh sakta hay :stuck_out_tongue:

aur khawab deikhney pey pabandi thoori hey din ko deikhien ya raat ko, likh key deikhien ya sunn aker. :hehe:

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Re: Re: Re: Stretching the very last moment…

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*Originally posted by chodhry: *

Taakey aap mein kuch ker guzzerney ka housla paida ho ;)
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Housla kitna hai, mien hoo.n janta
per ab kiya karoo.n Dil Nahi Manta :)