something 4 some1!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bin tery hum hain adhooray

Bin tery hum hain adhooray
Magar kahaiN gay nahiN
DartaiN haiN bin tery
Magar batain gay nahiN
Teri hi sochooN main khoya rehtaiN haiN
Tujj maiN dooby khood say beganay rehtaiN haiN
Magar ManyaiN gay nahiN
Tera naam likhty or mitatay rehtaiN haiN
Magar nahiN kahaiN gay
Tujjy Khuda say aksar raat kay
Peechlay pehar kitni shidat say
mangtaiN haiN, magar nahiN bataiN gay
Kay humaiN tum say muhabat ho gai hay!

By Subha

Salam all, najany ya kesi poem hay.. bohat jaldi main likh rahin hoon..& thanks in advance i won’t be able to reply soon:…

& 1 more thing…Plz pray 4 me zara DILL ki gehraion say plzzz:(

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Re: something 4 some1!

Written with heart. Very nice.

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*Originally posted by Asif M. Ali: *
Written with heart. Very nice.
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Thank you:)

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v. nice swera :)

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Xcellent… and so touchy :k::k::k:

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Jis kee behi hai achi hai

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bohut khoob:k::k:

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:k:
Bohat khooob Swera ji…
mangtaiN haiN, magar nahiN bataiN gay
Kay humaiN tum say muhabat ho gai hay!

wah wah …

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Bin tery hum hain adhooray

Bin tery hum hain adhooray
Magar kahaiN gay nahiN

Tujjy Khuda say aksar raat kay
Peechlay pehar kitni shidat say
mangtaiN haiN, magar nahiN bataiN gay
Kay humaiN tum say muhabat ho gai hay!

By Subha

Salam all, najany ya kesi poem hay.. bohat jaldi main likh rahin hoon..& thanks in advance i won't be able to reply soon:.....

& 1 more thing.....Plz pray 4 me zara DILL ki gehraion say plzzz:(
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           hi subha jee aap ney buhat he ache likhe he poetry but one thing aap ney likha keh pray 4 me zara dil sey , (pray tu hum aap key liyee kartey rahein gey )leiken r u fine tell us .
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:k: :k:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
v. nice swera :)
[/QUOTE]

Ahan, Thank you :D

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It is? :slight_smile:

Thanks:)

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Jis kee behi hai achi hai
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Acha, wesy likhi hum nay hi thi:)

Thanks...

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Bohat Bohat Shukriya GKK :slight_smile:

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Do baar Wah wah …Is ka matlab hay zara achi hi hay :smiley:

Thanks alot:)

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Duaa karo un say izhar ho jay dono ki chahat ka iqrar ho jay, BEQARARI kehni hay DARD bhi batana hay… :hehe: :hehe: (By the way it’s a song from movie Muhabat)

I said to duaa 4 me, coz kooch rooz say I am not feeling so well… But I’m feeling a lil better now.. Thanks Duaa kartay hain jo ap humary liya …And glad u like my poem… Thank you..

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Thanks…

Is ka matlb yahi hota hay na “nice” :smiley:

Just cheaking..

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xlent… sorry 4 late replying main kuch din… our khair tu thi na Duaain tu aap kaliye hain hi. magar yeh kia majboori aa gai keh aaj aap ki ham sey duaa kaliye kehna para. :slight_smile: Duaa :rolleyes:

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ji wah wah wah now three times means it really very very very good :blush:

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Aaj phir akele mein unse milne jana hai…mohabbat hai…

By the way…nice poem! :flower1: