something 4 some1!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: something 4 some1!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Bin tery hum hain adhooray

Bin tery hum hain adhooray
Magar kahaiN gay nahiN
DartaiN haiN bin tery
Magar batain gay nahiN
Teri hi sochooN main khoya rehtaiN haiN
Tujj maiN dooby khood say beganay rehtaiN haiN
Magar ManyaiN gay nahiN
Tera naam likhty or mitatay rehtaiN haiN
Magar nahiN kahaiN gay
Tujjy Khuda say aksar raat kay
Peechlay pehar kitni shidat say
mangtaiN haiN, magar nahiN bataiN gay
Kay humaiN tum say muhabat ho gai hay!

By Subha

:flower2: Hum na hon gay to kaho koun mana’ey ga tumhaiN
Buri baat hai her baat pe rootha na karo.

    it is a nice poem.i read this poem two days ago but could not comment .sorry for late.last stanza is really wonderfull.but kia bin bataey kam chal jae ga??kia aap ki mohabbat apna aap manwa le ge??

plz comment on that.i am looking for such a bundle of good poems from u.
nothing else instead of good wishes.

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buhet achi :(

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Thank u..

Koi baat nahiN wo kehty na" dair ay daroost ay" :smiley:

Ji duaain ki to zaroort kam az kaam mujjy hamisha rahi hay..hum saa ko hi hoti ha na…plz do pary :slight_smile:

Thank u.

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Good, good ,good :blush:

Thanks again… :flower1:

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Re: Re: Re: Re: something 4 some1!

Thanks.

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Re: Re: something 4 some1!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by cuteAmir: *

Thank u..koi baat nahin dair say reply kia,kia to sahi na…Dekain kia hota hay ,kooch keh to rahaiN hain na:hehe: ab itni choop bhi nahin haiN..
Good wishes r more then enough.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by cuteepie: *
buhet achi :(
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Thanks,
lkain itni udass na ho sweety-pie :) ajj to muskurao kay swera khush hay:):)