Soch-dar-soch

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Soch-dar-soch

Soch-dar-soch kisi ehsaas ka gehra-pan
jis ki koi wajaa hey na soorat hey na naam koi
dil ke aaNgan meiN yuN dhooni ramaaey beittha hey
ke ab to rooh sey nikalney waali cheekheiN bhi
is ke inhimaak meiN koi khalal nahi laaney paateiN!

Part-dar-part is ehsaas ka gehra-pan
itna gehra hey ke kisi hisaab meiN aata hi nahi
sabar-o-razaa ney jo jo sawaal utthaeiN heiN
un ka zikr to kisi jawaab meiN aata hi nahi
jin moimmoN ko hal karney ki tthaani hum ney
un ka tazkira to kisi nisaab meiN aata hi nahi
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Zeest ke sookhey huwey peirroN ki aab-yaari karey
dil ke tarrapttey huwey jazboN ki timaar-daari karey
wo to kho gaya jo nighaahoN meiN shifa rakhta tha
ab kon hey jo merey zakhmoN ki pewand-kaari karey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Teer’gi hey ke tishnigi hey ke na’jaaney kya hey!
be’kasi hey ke be’basi hey ke na’jaaney kya hey!
ba’naam-e-hayaat jo qismat ney merey naam likha
wo zindagi hey ke shikastagi hey ke na’jaaney kya hey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan…!

By: Amal

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Soch-dar-soch**

Zeest ke sookhey huwey peirroN ki aab-yaari karey
dil ke tarrapttey huwey jazboN ki timaar-daari karey
wo to kho gaya jo nighaahoN meiN shifa rakhta tha
ab kon hey jo merey zakhmoN ki pewand-kaari karey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Teer'gi hey ke tishnigi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
be'kasi hey ke be'basi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
ba'naam-e-hayaat jo qismat ney merey naam likha
wo zindagi hey ke shikastagi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan...!

By: Amal
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Amal kitni gaehri nazam hae ye. mood to sad kar dea aap nae per ya poem bahut hi gahri hae aur aur aur you know........aaj aap ki mafeil maein mujh ko age jaga mil gaei luckily :) first come first sit;)
p.s. dont ya check your pm?:(

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wah!!!:k::k:
its awesome:k:
kafe dino ke bad i’m speechless:D
thanks a lot for sharing a masterpiece:flower1:

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beautifull indeed and a pleasure to read :)

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its beautiful. zabardast.:k: :k: :k:

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Soch-dar-soch**

Part-dar-part is ehsaas ka gehra-pan
itna gehra hey ke kisi hisaab meiN aata hi nahi
sabar-o-razaa ney jo jo sawaal utthaeiN heiN
un ka zikr to kisi jawaab meiN aata hi nahi
jin moimmoN ko hal karney ki tthaani hum ney
un ka tazkira to kisi nisaab meiN aata hi nahi
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Teer'gi hey ke tishnigi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
be'kasi hey ke be'basi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
ba'naam-e-hayaat jo qismat ney merey naam likha
wo zindagi hey ke shikastagi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan...!

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Beautiful Aymal........thanks 4 sharin..

PS: hum ne apnay wording change kar leay..:)..ap ko shikwa hota tha no words per soocha k chaliey nazam per ye jisarat kar k dekhtey haiN..:)

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sach baataon.......tu, "shauq-e-tamasha" kae bad yeh nazam hai jo seedha dil main uttar gaee..........darmiyan main bhi achchee nazamain theen magar,.................... "Mohabat ka choota sa sadqa".........."shauq-e-tamasha" aur aab yeh, kuch pagal sa kar deya mujhae..........
Khudaya !!!! yeh tu kise baras-ha-baras kae shaer ki lagtee hai, "pal do pal "kae ki nahin....................kol-o-fail main itna tazad !!!!!!!

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Soch-dar-soch**

Soch-dar-soch kisi ehsaas ka gehra-pan
jis ki koi wajaa hey na soorat hey na naam koi

Jab Maloom hii nahiN tou Soch hii kyaa hay confuse
Yeh tou aesay hi hay "Thehray huwey paani meiN bhanwar"

Part-dar-part is ehsaas ka gehra-pan
itna gehra hey ke kisi hisaab meiN aata hi nahi
sabar-o-razaa ney jo jo sawaal utthaeiN heiN
un ka zikr to kisi jawaab meiN aata hi nahi
jin moimmoN ko hal karney ki tthaani hum ney
un ka tazkira to kisi nisaab meiN aata hi nahi
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Konsay Sawaal aur konsay jawaab kii baat ho rahii :~)

Zeest ke sookhey huwey peirroN ki aab-yaari karey
dil ke tarrapttey huwey jazboN ki timaar-daari karey
wo to kho gaya jo nighaahoN meiN shifa rakhta tha
ab kon hey jo merey zakhmoN ki pewand-kaari karey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Hmmmm

Teer'gi hey ke tishnigi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
be'kasi hey ke be'basi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
ba'naam-e-hayaat jo qismat ney merey naam likha
wo zindagi hey ke shikastagi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan...!

Anyway Nazm pe Ajeeb commentry kay liye ma'azrat ....Poori Nazm hii Buhat khoobsurat hay :-)

By: Amal

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Re: Soch-dar-soch

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Soch-dar-soch**

Soch-dar-soch kisi ehsaas ka gehra-pan
jis ki koi wajaa hey na soorat hey na naam koi
dil ke aaNgan meiN yuN dhooni ramaaey beittha hey
ke ab to rooh sey nikalney waali cheekheiN bhi
is ke inhimaak meiN koi khalal nahi laaney paateiN!

Part-dar-part is ehsaas ka gehra-pan
itna gehra hey ke kisi hisaab meiN aata hi nahi
sabar-o-razaa ney jo jo sawaal utthaeiN heiN
un ka zikr to kisi jawaab meiN aata hi nahi
jin moimmoN ko hal karney ki tthaani hum ney
un ka tazkira to kisi nisaab meiN aata hi nahi
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Zeest ke sookhey huwey peirroN ki aab-yaari karey
dil ke tarrapttey huwey jazboN ki timaar-daari karey
wo to kho gaya jo nighaahoN meiN shifa rakhta tha
ab kon hey jo merey zakhmoN ki pewand-kaari karey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!

Teer'gi hey ke tishnigi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
be'kasi hey ke be'basi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
ba'naam-e-hayaat jo qismat ney merey naam likha
wo zindagi hey ke shikastagi hey ke na'jaaney kya hey!
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan...!

By: Amal
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Mash Allah all is beautifyl.... thanks alot for sharing....

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wo to kho gaya jo nighaahoN meiN shifa rakhta tha

:k:

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Mehvar: Thanx for liking the poem. I was
busy so I couldn't reply your PM. By the way,
you can go ahead, I have no objection. No right

reserved!:)

**ghazal kisi ke, Guest7777, ameen, Dilsay

& Azad:** Pasandeedgi ke leeye bohat bohat shukriya.

NikamiJi: Thanx for changing your dialouges:)

aadhoorighazal: Thanx a lot for your
detailed comments. I am obliged:)

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
*
Soch-dar-soch kisi ehsaas ka gehra-pan
jis ki koi wajaa hey na soorat hey na naam koi
**
Jab Maloom hii nahiN tou Soch hii kyaa hay confuse
Yeh tou aesay hi hay "Thehray huwey paani meiN bhanwar"

**
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To aap ka ye maanna hey ke insaan ko sab kuch
maaloom hota hey? Kya aap ko sab kuch maaloom hey?
Rahi baat "ttherey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar"
deikhney ki, to Gul jesey sehraaoN ki khaamoshi
meiN ghazab ke toofaan chupey hotey heiN na, wesey
hi baaz aoqaat ttherey huwey paaniyoN ki god meiN
bhaNwar bhi pal rahey hotey heiN. Baat sirf itni si
hey ke hameiN sirf kuch baateiN "Maloom" heiN, sab nahi.

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
*

Part-dar-part is ehsaas ka gehra-pan
itna gehra hey ke kisi hisaab meiN aata hi nahi
sabar-o-razaa ney jo jo sawaal utthaeiN heiN
un ka zikr to kisi jawaab meiN aata hi nahi
jin moimmoN ko hal karney ki tthaani hum ney
un ka tazkira to kisi nisaab meiN aata hi nahi
soch-dar-soch yehi ehsaas hey aur is ka gehra-pan!
**
Konsay Sawaal aur konsay jawaab kii baat ho rahii :~)

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Gul Sabar-o-razaa ya to sawaal kartey nahi heiN,
aur agar kartey heiN to sirf yehi ke aakhir unki
inteha kya hey? Unhey kab tak istimaal kia jaey ga?
Agar kabhi aap ka sabar-o-razaa koi sawaal utthey
ga to us ka matlab ho ga ke aap ke bardaasht ki
qoowat jawaad dey rahi hey aur ab aap qismat sey ye
poochna cha rahi ho ke aakhir kab tak...! Got it?

Anyhow, is "Ajeeb commentry" ke leeye bohat bohat
shukriya. Ab bhi ya agar aenda bhi koi baat samajh
na aaey to phir pooch lijeeye ga :~)

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Gul gay Gulshan gay, kadu karaylay reh gay :devil: … phir karaylay :frowning: kia mosseebat hay :smack:

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Bohat khoob, Amal Ji...
Thanks for sharing! :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

Beautiful Aymal........thanks 4 sharin..

PS: hum ne apnay wording change kar leay..:)..ap ko shikwa hota tha no words per soocha k chaliey nazam per ye jisarat kar k dekhtey haiN..:)
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Shuker hai kufr TooTa KHuda Khuda kerkay
Hawaaon nay bhi ruKH badla KHuda KHuda kerkay ;)

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Amal jee pori nazm hi sochney pe majbor karti he per aakhri paira to …dil key laho rolaney ko kafi he
Amal jee achhey likhney waley ki nishani bhi to yehi he keh parhney walooN ko lagey keh yeh unkey dil ki aawaaz he… likhtey rahiye:flower1:

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ahhhh koyal k dil ki awaz kahan hai ..:teary1:

May i come in…
nazam per k sirf aik sentence ap k leay

:flower1: bari mushkil se hota hia chaman maiN deda-war paida :flower1:

PS: i guess jawab tu milna nahi phir be…

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yei poetry forum hei sabze ke shop nehe :disgust:

:rolleyes:

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bhaee ab mei kia kehu mere samg me to koch ayi he nehe hard urdu:(
lekin ap nei likhe hei toh yakenn boht ache he ho ge :flower2::slight_smile:

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you are right :slight_smile: