Soch-dar-soch

_Nazish · April 11, 2003, 5:44pm

wah Amal

beautiful as usual :k:

chand_chehra · April 11, 2003, 8:40pm

Re: Soch-dar-soch

bohat khoob amal :k:

nikii · April 11, 2003, 10:46pm

bhut khoob Amal ji :)
hamesha ki tarah zaberadst :)

Amal · April 13, 2003, 1:56pm

Thanx a lot WiseGuy, ~Nazish~, nikii & CC...so nice of you:)

Rameesha ji bohat bohat sukriya. Thanx for coming and reading the poem:)

Koyal aap ki tashreef-aavari ka bhi bohat
bohat sukriya. Aap ko ijaazat ki zaroorat kab sey
peish aaney lagi? Rahi baat jawaab ki, to meri

taraf sey saaf jawaab hey;)

Masoom Muskaan aap ko kuch samajh nahi
aaya?:( Chalo koi baat nahi, hum apni choooooooti si
behna ke leeye koi aasaan si nazm likheiN ge. Theek?:)

Dilsay · April 13, 2003, 5:14pm

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Thanx a lot WiseGuy, ~Nazish~, nikii & CC...so nice of you:)

Rameesha ji bohat bohat sukriya. Thanx for coming and reading the poem:)

Koyal aap ki tashreef-aavari ka bhi bohat
bohat sukriya. Aap ko ijaazat ki zaroorat kab sey
peish aaney lagi? Rahi baat jawaab ki, to meri

taraf sey saaf jawaab hey;)

Masoom Muskaan aap ko kuch samajh nahi
aaya?:( Chalo koi baat nahi, hum apni choooooooti si
behna ke leeye koi aasaan si nazm likheiN ge. Theek?:)
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So sweet of you... this shows you care for every one and that is the great thing....

system · April 13, 2003, 6:32pm

wOOooOOOOooOOW, :k: bohat khoobsurut nazm hai.. aik aik lufz khoobsurut hai.. bohat hi acha likha hai aap ney Amal.. well done..

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 13, 2003, 8:15pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Amal: *
*Masoom Muskaan** aap ko kuch samajh nahi
aaya?:( Chalo koi baat nahi, hum apni choooooooti si
behna ke leeye koi aasaan si nazm likheiN ge. Theek?:)
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awwwwwwww bhaee merie teref sei ijazet hei :)thankooo thanko

Eastern_Thoughts · April 13, 2003, 9:08pm

As Usual, another Great Peace :)
thanku Amal for shairing such nice thoughts :)
Keep writting and shairng also....

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 15, 2003, 7:15am

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

To aap ka ye maanna hey ke insaan ko sab kuch
maaloom hota hey? Kya aap ko sab kuch maaloom hey?
Rahi baat "ttherey huwey paani meiN bhaNwar"
deikhney ki, to Gul jesey sehraaoN ki khaamoshi
meiN ghazab ke toofaan chupey hotey heiN na, wesey
hi baaz aoqaat ttherey huwey paaniyoN ki god meiN
bhaNwar bhi pal rahey hotey heiN. Baat sirf itni si
hey ke hameiN sirf kuch baateiN "Maloom" heiN, sab nahi.

Gul Sabar-o-razaa ya to sawaal kartey nahi heiN,
aur agar kartey heiN to sirf yehi ke aakhir unki
inteha kya hey? Unhey kab tak istimaal kia jaey ga?
Agar kabhi aap ka sabar-o-razaa koi sawaal utthey
ga to us ka matlab ho ga ke aap ke bardaasht ki
qoowat jawaad dey rahi hey aur ab aap qismat sey ye
poochna cha rahi ho ke aakhir kab tak...! Got it?

Anyhow, is "Ajeeb commentry" ke leeye bohat bohat
shukriya. Ab bhi ya agar aenda bhi koi baat samajh
na aaey to phir pooch lijeeye ga :~)
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hum nay kab kahaa insaaN ko sab kuch maluum hotaa hay,Soch kay baaray baat ho rahii thii jis ka na koii naam hay na suurat hay lekin phir bhii gehraai hay, yehii baat confuse karnay ko kafi thii, aur wesay bhii now i know insaaN ko waqeii kuch nahiN mauum sometimes buhat kuch clear hotaa hay saamnay phir bhii insaaN samajh nahiN pataa.. anyhow aap nay jis Umdgii say samjhaya hay isskay liyee aap ka buhat buhat shukriyaa ab likhnay walaa hi bataa saktaa hay na usskay mind mein kyaa thaa likhtay huwey:-p

its beauriful Nazm, once again Thanks for sharing.

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 15, 2003, 8:50am

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muge to wo bih samg nehe ai

soweyyyy hehe:

Koyal · April 15, 2003, 12:38pm

saaf jawab yani k koi jawab nahi shaier hazraat k lufz itnay rude be boltey hain pata nahi tha

PS: barey be-abro ho k terya koochay se hum niqlay

Nazam · May 9, 2003, 3:46pm

congratulation amal

lajavab

MARRIED_NY · May 16, 2003, 12:08am

WAHH

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