Shor Karti hai Khaam'shi ki tarah (apne Qalam se)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Shor karti hai kHaam’shi ki tarah
Zindagi kab hai Zindagi ki tarah

Is ka Idraak bhi zaroori hai
Teergi bhi hai Roshni ki tarah

Be-kHayaali meiN hai kHayaal tera
Meri be-rabt Shairi ki tarah

Tuu bhi mujh se milaa to kaise milaa
Is zamaane ki berukHi ki tarah

Chaar-suu pHailte andhere meiN
Teri YaadeiN haiN Chaandni ki tarah

Har Takalluf se paak hai “Shakir”
Dil bhi Fitrat ki Saadgi ki tarah

[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited June 17, 2002).]

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very Nice poetry

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keep it up aur kab book publish ho raha hai appki?
and welcome here hope app aur achi achi apni ghazals nazm sunnaain ge

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Nice

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— Pangay Baaz —

Rude Boyz Rulez

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Nice

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
**Shor karti hai kHaam’shi ki tarah
Zindagi kab hai Zindagi ki tarah

Chaar-suu pHailte andhere meiN
Teri YaadeiN haiN Chaandni ki tarah

V nice and welcome

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Bohot khoob

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nice :K:

I'm looking back on things i've done
I never want to play the same old part
keep u in the dark
Now let me show u the shape of my HeArT

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Is ka Idraak bhi zaroori hai
Teergi bhi hai Roshni ki tarah

wah sahib.....buhat khube.
aur bhi sunaaiye ga.

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Shukriaa Dosto iss Kaawish ko passand karne ka
Jazzak aallah

Yeh QiSaS ajeeb-o-gHareeb haiN,yeh MohabbatoN ke Naseeb haiN
Mujhe kaise kHud se Juda kare,usey kuch batao keh keya kare
Kabhi Taiy kare younhi soch soch meiN Firaaq ke Faasle
Mere peecHe Aake dabbe dabbe meri AankheiN mooNd hansa kare

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wah very nice tasneef uncle, great one

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n yea welcome here

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~HaY JaZbA JuNoOn ToU HiMmAt Na HaAr JuStUjOo Jo KaRaY Wo ChUaY AsMaAn, MeHnAt ApNi HoGi PeHcHaAn KaBhI Na BhUlO, SaB Ki NaZrOn MaIn.. PAKISTAN KaBhI Na BhUlO, PAKISTAN HaI TuMhArA, PAKISTAN HaI HumArA~

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Salaam and thanx Chorni jee
yeh haam aap ke uncle kaisse hogaye

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lekin shukriaa iss izzat afzaai ka ..kHushi hui …keh aap ne izzat se pukaaraa aur iss qabil samjhaa
JazzaakAllah

Yeh QiSaS ajeeb-o-gHareeb haiN,yeh MohabbatoN ke Naseeb haiN
Mujhe kaise kHud se Juda kare,usey kuch batao keh keya kare
Kabhi Taiy kare younhi soch soch meiN Firaaq ke Faasle
Mere peecHe Aake dabbe dabbe meri AankheiN mooNd hansa kare

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w/salam uncle ji, and ur alwayz welcome

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. bus aap humaray uncle ewaieen ho gaye, aap ko bura laga ho tou maaf kar dain

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. aur ab uncle kaha hai tou izzat tou deni paray gee na

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~HaY JaZbA JuNoOn ToU HiMmAt Na HaAr JuStUjOo Jo KaRaY Wo ChUaY AsMaAn, MeHnAt ApNi HoGi PeHcHaAn KaBhI Na BhUlO, SaB Ki NaZrOn MaIn.. PAKISTAN KaBhI Na BhUlO, PAKISTAN HaI TuMhArA, PAKISTAN HaI HumArA~

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NahiN Chorni mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahiN laggaa
Bass darr iss baat ka hai keh aik chorni ka Uncle ban gaiya hooN kahiN report na hojaye lollzz …!!!

Yeh QiSaS ajeeb-o-gHareeb haiN,yeh MohabbatoN ke Naseeb haiN
Mujhe kaise kHud se Juda kare,usey kuch batao keh keya kare
Kabhi Taiy kare younhi soch soch meiN Firaaq ke Faasle
Mere peecHe Aake dabbe dabbe meri AankheiN mooNd hansa kare

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very nice…
keep it up

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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…

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shukriaa Dhoop sahibaa…aab aapki dhhoop ka saiya Meri gHazal par parh gaiya hai to yaqeenaan issko chaar chaand lageiN na lagein magar aapki Dhoop ke saye se meri gHazal CHaand ban jaigi jazzak allah sab doston ka shukriaa

Daiyaar-e-MagHrib se jaane walo!daiyaar-e-Mashriq ke BaasioN ko
Kisi gHareeb-ul-Watan Musafir ki ChaahtoN ka salaam kehnaa
Hamaare Shaam-o-Sehar ka keya Haal poocHte ho ke lam’haa lam’haa
Naseeb in ka bana rahe haiN tumhaare hi Sub’ho Shaam kehnaa

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LOL

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, wow im glad mere uncle ke paas ek bohot acha sa sense of humor bhi hai!!

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..aap fikar na karain uncle ji, eventhough mein chorni hoon, humaaray haath bohot lambay hain aur contacts bhi bohot ziada hain..aap ko koi touch nahi karay ga aur naa he report lagaaya ga, i gaurantee u

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~HaY JaZbA JuNoOn ToU HiMmAt Na HaAr JuStUjOo Jo KaRaY Wo ChUaY AsMaAn, MeHnAt ApNi HoGi PeHcHaAn KaBhI Na BhUlO, SaB Ki NaZrOn MaIn.. PAKISTAN KaBhI Na BhUlO, PAKISTAN HaI TuMhArA, PAKISTAN HaI HumArA~

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**
Dekho marwaaa naa denaa wesse …apaass ki baat hai maiN bhi Underworld ka Boss hoooN

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Khoob guzre gi mil betheinge jab chor do

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KiouN bhateeji hojaao Taiyaaaar aaj raat kaahaN daaKkaaa marna hai Gadha na agHwaa karleiN yahaN se…Tawaan bhi Thheeek Thaak milega GhazloN aur posting ki soorat meiN …keya khaiyaalll?

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Daiyaar-e-MagHrib se jaane walo!daiyaar-e-Mashriq ke BaasioN ko
Kisi gHareeb-ul-Watan Musafir ki ChaahtoN ka salaam kehnaa
Hamaare Shaam-o-Sehar ka keya Haal poocHte ho ke lam’haa lam’haa
Naseeb in ka bana rahe haiN tumhaare hi Sub’ho Shaam kehnaa

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Hmmmm yeh kia ho raha hai ..aray yeh kia ho raha hai ???

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tasneef uncle

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mujhe pata tha daal main kuch kaala hai, pakray gaye na!! shukar hai mujhe apni buri side nahi istemaal karni paree, khud ba khud bata diya lol

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nahi nahi yahan ka gadha mera chacha hai, usay aghwa nahi kar sakte he’s too cute to be kidnapped

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. kiun na yahan ki hacker aunty ko aghwa kiya jaaye? wese bhi wo mujhe dada banaane pe tuli huiee hain!!

nayab aunty aap ki samajh main nahi aaye ga, yeh ek chorni aur uss ke uncle dakoo ki aapas ki baat hai

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very nice poem
sung dil sanam 

                                                             yeh dua hai atish-e-ishq mein,
                                                                    tu  bhi  meri  tarha  jala  kare

                                                              na  ho  naseeb  tujhe  hansna,
                                                                     tere  dil  mein  dard  utha  kare

                                                              tere  samne  tera  ghar  jale,
                                                                     tera  bas  chale  na bujha  sake

                                                              tere  dil  se  nikle  yehi  dua,
                                                                     ke  na  ghar  kisi  ka  jala  kare