sharmindagi hae humko bahot hum milen tumhen tum sar basar khushi the magar gham milen tumhen
mae apne aap mei na mila iss ka gham nahi gham toh ye hae ke tum bhi bahot kamm mile tumhen
hae jo hamara ik hisaab us hisaab se aati hae humko sharm ke paiham mile tumhen
tum ko jahan-e-shaukh-e-tamanna mei kya mila hum bhi milen to darham-o-barham milen tumhen
mae un mei aaj tak kabhi paaya nahi gaya
**janaan! jo mere shaukh ke aalam milen tumhe **
tumne hamare dil mei bahot din safar kiya sharminda hae ke uss mei bahot kham milen tumhen
yuun ho ke aur hi koi hawwa mile mujhe ho yuun ke aur hi koi adam mile tumhen
im looking forward to people’s thoughts n ideas about this poem***.*** Please zara thaher ke, kuch batayen ke kaesa laga ye- na ke sirf acha/thumb-up/zabardast etc. thanks all.
J**hanjharewali **pehley to ye bataiye ke ye ghazal hey kis ki jo is comments pe itna israar ho raha hey? Anyway, achi ghazal hey, lekin bohat achi nahi hey, kuch kuch confusion bhi hey kaheiN kaheiN. Shaed hameiN hi lag raha ho aesa, sorry But overall it’s not bad :k: Thanx for sharing with us
nice thoughts, man. really deep. it suits better when a woman says this to a man. as you indicate sentiments that are feminine.
they admit more that we do.
but why are you sherminda if love at your end was pure and clear?
you should not be.
in fact, you should tell that woman that you are still in love with her, and she made a huge mistake in disposing off her trust in you, or to have left you.
love has no logic, man.
poetry is a way to condemn the loveless.
reminding him or her, of their cuckoo-ness.
dudets, you can treat men as you like.
please be a bit gentle. :)
we know you are.
Anyway, achi ghazal hey, lekin bohat achi nahi hey, kuch kuch confusion bhi hey kaheiN kaheiN. Shaed hameiN hi lag raha ho aesa, sorry 
thank u tahreem!
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