- Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

boht achee ghazal lekhee he :)

[aanish]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

@Anwaar Qureshi

sochtaa hooN, dil kee baat zubaaN par laY hee aaouN
mazaa kuch tau rakhaa hogaa Qudrat naY ruswaai maiN

Its simply beautiful. :k:

[Prince_Ali]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

huaY abb aur kissi dil kaY woh aseer Anwaar
ajab asraar chupaY haiN aye Khudaa teri Sanna’ii maiN

wah Anwaar bhai! great poem :k:

[rkopra]

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Hello and salam to all the readers... I am sharing my latest poem after my last entry here in MAY... I have not shared a lot of my poems here in last couple of years and there have been only few times that I posted anything... Consider this one of those as well :)

The first sher (with ammendments) was written long time ago ... it's only now that I have written a whole poem on the idea of the first sher :)

Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN ** **JaisaY Doob gayaa Sooraj samander kee gehraai maiN

naa jaanaY, tum saY naataa jub saY chooTaa hai Sadaa dil TooTnaY kee aati hai Shehnaai maiN

jub kabhi khiyaaL kee waadi saY guzartaa hooN DikhtaY haiN chehraY Ajnabi, Rung-e-shanaasaai maiN

sochtaa hooN, dil kee baat zubaaN par laY hee aaouN mazaa kuch tau rakhaa hogaa Qudrat naY ruswaai maiN

woh naa samjhaa kuch bhee meri baatoN kaa mafhoom maiN naY joRaY thaY haroof raat kee siyaahi maiN

huaY abb aur kissi dil kaY woh aseer Anwaar ajab asraar chupaY haiN aye Khudaa teri Sanna'ii maiN

Anwaar** Q*ureshi **July 10, 2007*

*in your waiting the evening of my love came
the way the sun drowned in the ocean's depths

since I broke off with you, I don't know why
I hear the breaking off noises of my heart

whenever I happen to think of you
I see strangness in familiar faces

sometime I wish I tell what's in my heart
god must have reserved some pleasure in shame

he couldn't get what was on my mind
I put my words together in the darkness of night

he's now prisoner of someone's heart, Anwaar
strange secrets are hidden in God's grace. *

[AQ]

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@Dushwari

AQ,

your poems are yours and they are good. you’re right that poems are a part of the person who writes them, so the more genuine, the more appealing.

best,
dushwari

thank you dush

@_Masoom_Muskaan

boht achee ghazal lekhee he

thanks for the nice words… Muskaan

@aanish

Its simply beautiful. :k:

zarrah nawaazi hai

@Prince_Ali

wah Anwaar bhai! great poem :k:

shukriya

@rkopra

in your waiting the evening of my love came
*the way the sun drowned in the ocean’s depths *

since I broke off with you, I don’t know why
I hear the breaking off noises of my heart

whenever I happen to think of you
I see strangness in familiar faces

sometime I wish I tell what’s in my heart
god must have reserved some pleasure in shame

he couldn’t get what was on my mind
I put my words together in the darkness of night

he’s now prisoner of someone’s heart, Anwaar
*strange secrets are hidden in God’s grace. *

Thank you for the translation Sir … It looks very promising though IMO, it loses my thought at few places while leaving out some of the much needed translations for some objects that you have left… nonetheless, a very nice thing and I must appreciate this

[rkopra]

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@Anwaar Qureshi

Thank you for the translation Sir .... It looks very promising though IMO, it loses my thought at few places while leaving out some of the much needed translations for some objects that you have left... nonetheless, a very nice thing and I must appreciate this :)

Anwaar bhai, you're welcome. This was the first draft. I'd like to revise the translation with your help. Could you please be more specific. I plan to prepare an anthology of contemporary Urdu poetry translated into English.

[AQ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

^
I'll get back to you soon.

[goodnews]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

@Anwaar Qureshi

sochtaa hooN, dil kee baat zubaaN par laY hee aaouN
mazaa kuch tau rakhaa hogaa Qudrat naY ruswaai maiN

Anwaar** Q**ureshi
July 10, 2007

Wah!
Parveen Shakir ny bhi kuch aysa hi kaha hy shaid,
Apni Ruswai tery nam ka chrcha dykhon.
Ik zara shyr kahon or main kia kia dykhon…

[AQ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

^
:)

[SJ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

Bohat Khubsurat ghazal hai :k:
Aap to bohat achay shayar hain

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

Beautiful ghazal… thanks for sharin

[AQ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

sonia and HH: Thanks :)

[WiseGuy]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

Bohat khoob, thank you for sharing. :)

[AQ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

^ thanks nadz :)

[Azad]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

woh naa samjhaa kuch bhee meri baatoN kaa mafhoom

hummm

[AQ]

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@Azad

woh naa samjhaa kuch bhee meri baatoN kaa mafhoom

hummm

i knew after reading your name as the last poster, you would point out that

[P_G]

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**
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mazaa kuch tau rakhaa hogaa Qudrat naY ruswaai maiN
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: D

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khoobsoorat alfaz ko terteeb daina bhi ik fun hay ....poem bohat achee hay lakin mere tareefe alfaz bilkul nahi achay * shirminda*

[goodnews]

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^ :)

her aik muskurahat muskan nahi hoti
Nafrat hu ya muhubbat asan nahi hoti;)

[AQ]

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@Problem _girl

: D

khoobsoorat alfaz ko terteeb daina bhi ik fun hay ....poem bohat achee hay lakin mere tareefe alfaz bilkul nahi achay * shirminda*

thanks : D

her aik muskurahat muskan nahi hoti Nafrat hu ya muhubbat asan nahi hoti;)

mera majlisi tabassum, mera tarjumaaN naheeN hai ;-)

[EEMAAN]

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Wah,,,bohat khubsurat ghazal hai..