- Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

[AQ]

Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

@Dushwari

AQ,

your poems are yours and they are good. you’re right that poems are a part of the person who writes them, so the more genuine, the more appealing.

best,
dushwari

thank you dush

@_Masoom_Muskaan

boht achee ghazal lekhee he

thanks for the nice words… Muskaan

@aanish

Its simply beautiful. :k:

zarrah nawaazi hai

@Prince_Ali

wah Anwaar bhai! great poem :k:

shukriya

@rkopra

in your waiting the evening of my love came
*the way the sun drowned in the ocean’s depths *

since I broke off with you, I don’t know why
I hear the breaking off noises of my heart

whenever I happen to think of you
I see strangness in familiar faces

sometime I wish I tell what’s in my heart
god must have reserved some pleasure in shame

he couldn’t get what was on my mind
I put my words together in the darkness of night

he’s now prisoner of someone’s heart, Anwaar
*strange secrets are hidden in God’s grace. *

Thank you for the translation Sir … It looks very promising though IMO, it loses my thought at few places while leaving out some of the much needed translations for some objects that you have left… nonetheless, a very nice thing and I must appreciate this