- Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

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Re: - Shaam-e-Mohabbat dhal gaYee yooN Tanhaai maiN -

Here I am

@Amal

Outstanding opening Anwar

Ye bhi umda aashaar heiN

This is again a top shot. No doubt the sheir has been put together nicely. But I am more impressed with the depth of thinking working behind the sheir. Remarkable Anwaar And thanx for sharing it with us

Thank you Amal.
You have been very nice to me on these forums and your words have always inspired me. I wish I could have been of the same caliber but then, woh kiyaa kehtaY haiN “AIk miyaan maiN dau talwaaraiN naheeN rehteeN”

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Wah, buhat hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hey Anwaar,wesey tou poori ghazal hi buhat achi hey lekin quoted part behad zabardast hey…kya meiN aapki ye ghazal design kar sakti hooN?:~) thanks alot for sharing this beauty:-)

Thanks GUL and as I said you have done a beautiful job.

@Shab-e-Hijar

**jub kabhi khiyaaL kee waadi saY guzartaa hooN****DikhtaY haiN chehraY Ajnabi, Rung-e-shanaasaai maiN** sochtaa hooN, dil kee baat zubaaN par laY hee aaouN**mazaa kuch tau rakhaa hogaa Qudrat naY ruswaai maiN** **woh naa samjhaa kuch bhee meri baatoN kaa mafhoom****maiN naY joRaY thaY haroof raat kee siyaahi maiN** very nice :k:keep up the good work

Yeah yeah i know what you wanted to say

Thanks:D

@Koyal

huaY abb aur kissi dil kaY woh aseer Anwaarajab asraar chupaY haiN aye Khudaa teri Sanna’ii maiN zahar hia ap lift nahi karatey tu kisi aur ka seer tu hona he hai na v nice gazal AQ

meri kiyaa auqaat kay kissi ko lift karataa phirooN :-)

@XChorniX

wah ji wah, bari gal eh

thanks Chorni

@SAJAL

Wow this is good work.

thankooo :)

@Jhanjharewali

ye bataiye, aesa likhne ke liye, kya kya karna padTa hae Anwar ji? Raat kitni siyaah honi chahiye, safar kitna taveel?

aisay karnay kay liye insaan ko jiss marhallay say guzarna paRtaa hai, woh kissi kay liye naheeN maangnaa chaahiye.. Raat amaawas kee aur safar kee tawaalat aisee jo laa mutanaahi mehsoos ho :-)

@ehsan

Wah kya baat hai. It’s just out of this world. Very well done. :k:

Thanks. It's an honour to get such remarks from you.

@Dushwari

achi poem hey.

Thank you.

Amal, IF you want, you can delete the thread now