Sawaaliya Tasveer

[Amal]

**Does any sheir strike your mind to describe this picture perfectly???
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http://www.paklinks.com/gs/imagehosting/thumb_321446ddb3d71c249.gif

[AQ]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

kiyaa hotaa hay KhizaaN bahaar kay aanay jaanay say?
subb mosam haiN dil khilnay aur dil murjhaanay say

[Amal]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

Hmmm…nice sheir Anwaar :k: Looks like your own … I couldn’t find one for the pic as of now…trying to write one for it…

[Sheal]

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wah zaberdast :)

[AQ]

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@Amal

Hmmm…nice sheir Anwaar :k: Looks like your own … I couldn’t find one for the pic as of now…trying to write one for it…

no .. it is not mine.. it belongs to my teacher.. Hassan Akbar Kamal

[TLK]

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Hassan Akbar Kamal was your teacher? Roohaani Ustaad ya asli walaay?

[AQ]

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@tariqlkhan

Hassan Akbar Kamal was your teacher? Roohaani Ustaad ya asli walaay?

asli waalay.. english kaY teacher bhaiyaa :D… Delhi college

I used to go to his house in Nasirabad for english tutoring

[muncho]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

Main k ik burg e raigzaar jis pe kabhi
Kisee abar e karam ka guzar hota nahi

[redidentity]

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Ghanay Darakht Ka Saaya Talaash Kertay Hain
Ye Bhool Jatay Hain Shakhon Se Kia Kiya Hum Ne

[SJ]

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Wel Amal mujhay koi acha piece of poetry mila app ki tasveer k liay tu Inshallah gona share here..........:)
waisay tasveer kuch zayada he uj'ree hoe hai.........

[redidentity]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

meray shair pe comment kahan hai

[SJ]

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@redidentity

meray shair pe comment kahan hai

Aik tu tum baat be-baat naraz ho jatay ho…hmmm…
shair is really awesome…
bohat pyara hai tumharee tarhan…

[redidentity]

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@soniaa_jee

Aik tu tum baat be-baat naraz ho jatay ho…hmmm…
shair is really awesome…
bohat pyara hai tumharee tarhan…

Thnx alot.. wese ager tareef na bhi kertay to chalta..

Bus tang ker raha tha..

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

khizan rekhe gee darkhton ko be-samar kab tak
guzer he jae gee ye rut bhee hosla rakhna

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: Sawaaliya Tasveer

aye khuda ab ke ye kis rung mei aayee hae bahaar
zard hi zard hae, perdon pe hara kuch bhi nahi

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(lines from a jagjit singh ghazal :))

[Amal]

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You guys have put me in Catch-22. I am unable to say which one is better than the other. Super collection so far k:

@Anwaar Qureshi

kiyaa hotaa hay KhizaaN bahaar kay aanay jaanay say?
subb mosam haiN dil khilnay aur dil murjhaanay say

@redidentity

Ghanay Darakht Ka Saaya Talaash Kertay Hain
Ye Bhool Jatay Hain Shakhon Se Kia Kiya Hum Ne

@_Masoom_Muskaan

khizan rekhe gee darkhton ko be-samar kab tak
guzer he jae gee ye rut bhee hosla rakhna

@Jhanjharewali

aye khuda ab ke ye kis rung mei aayee hae bahaar
zard hi zard hae, perdon pe hara kuch bhi nahi

[seem]

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Pair ko deemak lag jaey , ya aadam zaad ko gham
Dono hi ko hum ne nasir bach'tay dekhaa kam.

[abeeha]

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ye saare per pode tum bin kae raat jaage hen
tum aa k aik b aar in ko sula do phir chale jana

[tum_bin_1]

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Ghanay Darakht Ka Saaya Talaash Kertay Hain Ye Bhool Jatay Hain Shakhon Se Kia Kiya Hum Ne

:(

acha shair hai

[tum_bin_1]

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@abeeha

ye saare per pode tum bin kae raat jaage hen
tum aa k aik b aar in ko sula do phir chale jana

really ?