Raaton mein gar na ashk bahauun to kyaa karun

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

ehsan January 15, 2011, 9:37am 1

**raaton mein gar na ashk bahauun to kyaa karun
eik pal bhee us ko bhul na paun to kyaa karun

main ne sunaa hai un ko andhere nahin pasand
raahon mein ab main dil na jalaun to kyaa karun

tumhin kaho ki chhod de jab zindagi bhee saath
phir maut ko gale na lagaaun to kyaa karun

socha toh tha ki chhod duun us kee gali Murad
lekin kahin qaraar na paaun to kya karun
**

blueangel January 15, 2011, 9:43am 2

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EB!

Amal January 15, 2011, 2:24pm 3

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wah…wah…wah… ehsan bhai aap to aa gaey aur cha gaey. Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey. Maza hi aagaya bas

ehsan January 15, 2011, 2:38pm 4

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Thanks

LP January 15, 2011, 2:39pm 5

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lovely and true

KKF January 15, 2011, 2:53pm 6

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**ek umda Ghazal marHamat farmaane kaa nihaayat shukria. Ghazal ka har she'r pasand aayaa bil_Khushoos mundarja zel she'r:

maiN ne sunaa hai un ko andhere nahiiN pasand
raahoN meN ab maiN dil na jalaauuN to kia karuuN?

matl'a ke misr'a-e-saanii kaa lafz-e-awwaliiN IK [alif zer kaaf] hai, na k EIK [alif, ye, kaaf]. roman urdu kuchh raqam karnaa kaar-e-mushkil hotaa hai is liye aisii qabaaHateN namoo_daar ho jaatii haiN. Khair. bahot Khoob kalaam hai Murad saaHib kaa :)**

ehsan January 15, 2011, 3:08pm 7

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Bhai meray IK yah EIK koi farak nahin parta jub aap angrezi alphabet mein likh rahein hain toh maqsad kalam pahunchaana hota hai, grammer kee class nahin. :)

KKF January 15, 2011, 3:26pm 8

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**
nahiiN janaab, meraa maqsad vo nahiiN thaa...meraa kahnaa thaa k paRhne waale ko aisaa lagtaa hai k misr'a bahr meN nahiiN hai...jab Ghaur se paRhaa tab pataa chalaa farq...mujhe Ghazal pasand aayii to dabi aawaaz men use gungunaayaa to uskii tarz bigaR gaii is liye apnii baat aap tak pahoNchaaii...IK = 1 rukn jab k eik = 2 rukn is liye ravaanii meN Khalal paRtaa hai...Khair...vazaaHat ke liye aapkaa mamnoon o mutashakkir huN...:)**

waleedhbk January 15, 2011, 3:31pm 9

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Bhut Khoob

Southie January 15, 2011, 4:04pm 10

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Simply wonderful.

"main ne sunaa hai un ko andhere nahin pasand
raahon mein ab main dil na jalaun to kyaa karun"

brilliant!

Did not understand Murad and qaraar. Hence last para sar key upar sey chala gaya. Phir bhi, bahot khoob

ehsan January 15, 2011, 4:13pm 11

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murad is the name of poet, what they call takhaluss. qaraar = chen .

KKF January 15, 2011, 4:14pm 12

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**
"Muraad" shaa'ir kaa taKhallus [pen-name" hai aur yeh 'umooman maqt'a [last she'r] men use hotaa hai...kabhii kabhaar matl'a [first she'r of the Ghazal] men bhii use ho jaataa hai...jaise AsGhar GonDvii kaa yeh she'r:
**
Khudaa jaane kahaN hai "AsGhar-e-diivaana barsoN se
k usko DhuunDhte haiN Ka'ba o but_Khaana barsoN se**.

qaraar means tranquility [suloon]**

Krypton January 15, 2011, 4:21pm 13

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mokararrr mokaraarr

**tumhin kaho ki chhod de jab zindagi bhee saath
phir maut ko gale na lagaaun to kyaa karun

**
explain this please

Amarbail January 15, 2011, 4:30pm 14

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Good one ehsan bhai … :k:

Shazia_Arif January 15, 2011, 4:39pm 15

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awsome Ehsan.

Southie January 15, 2011, 4:59pm 16

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Thanks!

Southie January 15, 2011, 5:01pm 17

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Shukriya. Bohuth badhiya explanation -

KKF January 15, 2011, 5:04pm 18

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welcome janaab :)

Amal January 15, 2011, 5:18pm 19

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ehsan bhai deikh rahey heiN, aap ka thread to superhit ho gaya hey :)

ehsan January 15, 2011, 5:26pm 20

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Jee yeh mera nahin shyar ka kamal hai. :D