I have read My Feudal Lord and the book that came after that (can't recall the name)., both by Tahmina.
Even though both books say the author name is Tahmina Khar, there is a remarkable difference between the two as far as the writing style is concerned..
My Feudal Lord is writted in a very fluent english. There are hardly any jerks, and no where it is felt that the author is haveing a hard time in saying what she wants to say. It seems like the books has been written by a professional writer.
The second books by Tahmina is very painful to read. I could not read beyond a few pages due to bad english. The author did not know how to put plainly what she wanted.
i have read My Feudal Lord. at the beginning she explained her house and other stuff in small detail. how can she remember so well all the stuff from her childhood. like furniture, curtains etc before when she was young